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jew

 

White Rasta.

 

ha

 

I'm currently working on this poem, let me know if there is anything I should fix:

There is a place where the sidewalk ends
And before the street begins,
And there the grass grows soft and white,
And there the sun burns crimson bright,
And there the moon-bird rests from his flight
To cool in the peppermint wind.

Let us leave this place where the smoke blows black
And the dark street winds and bends.
Past the pits where the asphalt flowers grow
We shall walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And watch where the chalk-white arrows go
To the place where the sidewalk ends.

Yes we'll walk with a walk that is measured and slow,
And we'll go where the chalk-white arrows go,
For the children, they mark, and the children, they know
The place where the sidewalk ends.

 

Shel?!

 

Seriously? When did plagiarism become funny?

 

I wasn't feeling the meter of that nigga one. I read it aloud.

And I didn't know Shel Silverstein had dreads

 

The meter is fine. It's the content that's lacking.

 

oh. maybe that was it.

 

Honestly Nothing..
Delta shooting through misty sky
On a clear blue night
Captain Bob sipping piping hot coffee
Says to co-pilot Randy
The sun is coming up over the horizon
For the very last time
The Earth got caught in a
Weird groove and
Barreled away
Rolling, rolling, rolling, rolling
Skeleton Bob and his skeleton crew
Skeletal passengers smiling and reading
Sky Magazine
Caught by gravity forever
Orbiting this cool rock

 

Lots of homosexual allusions in your poem which say a lot about your subconscious desires.

 

You never tire of being a total tool. I admire your persistence.

 

That's all in your imagination, which says a lot about you.

 

I didn't see any homo references just plane references. I liked your poem.

 

Your mom is in my imagination.

 

bsr ill admit on most days you are pretty funny.

but not today good sir, not today.

 

He's losing his touch, which frankly I find disappointing.

 

Maybe it is you people who are loosing your touch and getting more dull and less entertaining to make fun of.

 

Nope... It's just you.

 

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