Spontanious Haiku

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by hippie_chick666, Jun 8, 2007.

  1. WoodRat

    WoodRat Banned

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    Are we in agreemance or are you still quite disgusted by my addition?
    All hard feelings aside.
     
  2. Nalencer

    Nalencer Dig Yourself

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    We're in agreement. Like I said, fuck the rules. But, it's not technically Haiku unless it's 5-7-5, so that's how I wrote it. I believe you can also write 3-5-3 Haiku, but it's less common.
     
  3. WoodRat

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    Winter has passed on
    All the leaves begin to bloom
    What is this new void?
    -fin-

    I hate trash
    My dick smells like trash
    I must change
    -fin-

    Ate too much
    Fukken ate to much
    Oh shit no!
    -fin-
     
  4. hippie_chick666

    hippie_chick666 Senior Member

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    Open up to the divine
    Feel it in your soul
    Live within the moment
    And you will awaken

    Peace and love
     
  5. austin69

    austin69 Member

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    very pleasant poems. i like them :]
     
  6. WoodRat

    WoodRat Banned

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    intestines humming
    the birds, they keep chirping loud
    my pants need changing
    -fin-

    mourning air, misty
    a shine accross my smile
    her face glazes skies
    -fin-

    so close and so far
    I am patiently waiting
    thanks so close to home
    -fin-

    i'm a filthy mess
    the shower, it is broken
    pond water feels good
    -fin-

    a kingdom reigned down?
    so many lost, what was gained?
    an inquired peace?
    -fin-

    spontanuety
    it is a reckless goldmine
    life in the passing
    -fin-

    Tangerine skyline
    pocadot camels passing
    my eyes in limbo
    -fin-


    my hair, it is blonde
    I shall cut it and dye it
    I'm a male bimbo
    -fin-
     
  7. Watermellowny

    Watermellowny Member

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    A piece of paper
    blank
    filled by other peoples'
    thoughts
     
  8. Stubb0rnSt0n3r

    Stubb0rnSt0n3r Banned

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    Get A Stone...
    Find Height, Above me...
    Drop The Stone!!!!!
     
  9. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    I am not alone
    There are others here with me
    I am still alone.

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    This is a haiku, isn't it? I'm not all that knowledgeable.

    Peace,
    Aidan.
     
  10. i_was_in_shroom_land

    i_was_in_shroom_land Shroomier than you!

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    i like to have sex
    with multiples of people
    now i have herpes.
     
  11. redyelruc

    redyelruc The Yard Man

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    I was one of those.
    Now I've read her haiku here,
    Understand my itch.
    _________________________

    Peace,
    Aidan
     
  12. hippyhappy

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    Yes its really refreshing to see poetry with positivity, I believ in your type of work. When you focus on the positive, you attract the same positive vibes back into your everyday life! I'm a Leo
     

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