We're in agreement. Like I said, fuck the rules. But, it's not technically Haiku unless it's 5-7-5, so that's how I wrote it. I believe you can also write 3-5-3 Haiku, but it's less common.
Winter has passed on All the leaves begin to bloom What is this new void? -fin- I hate trash My dick smells like trash I must change -fin- Ate too much Fukken ate to much Oh shit no! -fin-
intestines humming the birds, they keep chirping loud my pants need changing -fin- mourning air, misty a shine accross my smile her face glazes skies -fin- so close and so far I am patiently waiting thanks so close to home -fin- i'm a filthy mess the shower, it is broken pond water feels good -fin- a kingdom reigned down? so many lost, what was gained? an inquired peace? -fin- spontanuety it is a reckless goldmine life in the passing -fin- Tangerine skyline pocadot camels passing my eyes in limbo -fin- my hair, it is blonde I shall cut it and dye it I'm a male bimbo -fin-
I am not alone There are others here with me I am still alone. _________________________________ This is a haiku, isn't it? I'm not all that knowledgeable. Peace, Aidan.
I was one of those. Now I've read her haiku here, Understand my itch. _________________________ Peace, Aidan
Yes its really refreshing to see poetry with positivity, I believ in your type of work. When you focus on the positive, you attract the same positive vibes back into your everyday life! I'm a Leo