Don't listen to anyone and do your own thing. You've got a wicked binging style. My only crit as of now is spelling. Haven't got around to reading everything, attention spans being not all that large but I've read a few and certainly hearing your message.
Thank you Kitty, Yeah Ill take to mind some proffessional mannerism. Love you. Keep keep that litterbox overflowen. ;0p _'0 D
Nice call kid, its hard to see what others do sometimes, but yeah when I look at em i can see how some of mine could be broken due to their structure. Keep kickin it boss
punch kick Punch gets the kickin with the Punch like a kick with the punch back flipin and a Happy and true skys let the colors provide something abstract while organic coming from all sides cause were looking inside add existence and you got the presistance of our essense listen to the lessons as they only spoke of blessings Sure somethings may be depressing but thats only cause ya stressing Things like you want their strings to pop you dont wanna drop off this smiling face in disgrace of whats great call it earth or birth or worth but it couldn't be worse then life in the inverse which would reverse this whole process of this continual burst in the first place which would erease the constast pace of the universe' taste which would waste the warm storm of sun rays which replays in the lives of every positive vibe, Positive vibes which provide you with life and conquere all strife Which puts your foot to the left of mine, as we spin flip and kick simotainously as if our minds were intertwined climbing mount shining whiles signing peace on the tai-lind tribe end when with perfect timing your reclining on the fining tiding of the clouds in skyland all whiles our hands remaine combining to destroy the confining grips of our spiritual blindings As our compaionships asks "Why you Lying" becuase our superstyling moves keep tying knots like Natty dread locks cause we rock the streets with beats so heavy they have to sign levys to keep our feet from turnings roads into teddy bears, see our ineivitible flow was bron ready to go, like a steady flow even though we both got our own ways to show the same ocean knows which rose from a rose and arose a rose ~KWADJO
from play arose kick flip prose from clay apposed slip drip rose from bay a hose sip dip flows from a day of lows hip lip pose from hay wind blows snip blip nose from away glows a rip kip grows in prose a rose grows and glows nose strike pose words like flows and he knows the flamanco flamingo clap beat sticado stop heat stilletto stomp beak snap notes rap music rise flap winged skies lap up water like flutter dress her hike ruffle deep red flower lips sweep feather long slips of grace curve weather song taste swerve of arms fly hips sing nerves and neck knows sense bird pink color motion do not think just drink from the music sink into candle wick rise in dancing flames leave the games this is a life that is a lake of pink birds that rise and fly as one filling the sky with sunrise ~ELODY
Woah my toe just throw a show when it belowed go to a bow and whiles so slow that bow went with the flow as is spun into an o
QUite an interesting paradox ain it. Write some words which havent been painted Almost as if poetry can some days be pain-ed I would like to believe that I can infitely do certain things And thanks to nature for its possible tidings I can So what is that A beliefe in the word laziness Or intolerence Or I am conditioned too complain ness You never believed it when they said You can't belive everything you read see hear and I would now say especially think Ive always believed in positivty And yeah for that very reason of negativity will only leave you roadless, and hopeless for that negative symbol isn't a minus for no reason But yeah brain dead possitivity keeps you the moment and happiness alive.
the difficult questions to answer of whats right and wrong i swear are always shades of grey. stick to this value i say but at the expense of anonother? to choose between morals is sacrificing a sister for a brother to save both siblings, this is not always an option "put your values in order" a method up for adoption but blurry is the border between sequential morals and overlap is unavoidable. choosing self over all to maintain neutrality? sometimes calm passivity is a step backwards for community then, resisting opression or lifting from depression (which coincide with my ideology) say that conflict is needed see then this progression must be heeded it is a delicate balance a fine line to walk to never be a hypocrit especially with the way we all talk as i said, sticking to one value sometimes means sacrificing another and putting them in an order of importance may be the toughest thing of all attepting to define them means surely we fall because each situation provides new contradiction so carefully thought out diction to plan out this fiction of alphabatized definitions may only build up walls blocking the potential for a "perfect" choice because no matter what you voice in real life there will rarely be anyhting other than shades of gray regardless of how convincing is your say it will contradict something said in a earler day im not trying to dissuade you from discussing your morals only realistically i persuade you to hold them closly and tighly while defining them gently and giveing them room to breath and live leave them a chance to grow and the freedom to give you thier wisdom. ~ELODY
I spoke too soon love When I wrote by moon love- Of a broken flower bud A lost drop of petal blood. But a sentence or two of appreciation a simple wish for a communication and my mind was able to rest, sweet words of consolation best. our eloquent companionship caressed again by whispering lip the doubts had not been justified but neither was the evening bonified startled rest left doubt and confusion brief sexual jest left frustrated illusion then alone to struggle against the half-heard my mind could neither grasp nor release the words I wished only for the warmth of your presence my body exhausted and needing condolence so that is why I wrote of a snapped stem and now I write that I do not condemn I learned a lesson of not withholding Now the distraction of mind is unfolding I forgive, forget and apologize And interaction is just a little more wise. ~ELODY
Wow, pernesia pow first seize ya to the right and left whats righteous now good whats bad was left behind sunset trail under vails of climbing sticks with fire paper shining from their extentions painting the mood of a ripe orange and bannana up the trail to light... black incumpusing purple to speak of enchanting fantasies of stories entervolving rounds within each spray of divine lights which flow as smoothly and just as mightly humble and rumbling as the blue slash turquoist oceans nears by I think to the right I think to the right where my home in the holy light surrouunded by goldy sights never begins and ends. ~KWADJO
there is a flower bud in my spine whose stem, so supple and crisp with new dawn has snapped her turgid health has worked against her, for had she been wilted her flex would not break. flower, delicate premature petals of pastel green, still encased in a protecting hands of leaf, these delicate petals will never grow now will not flourish into blossom and fade into seed bud will die before its time this broken stem has left a hole for demon thought to slip inside my plant body demons that question what is that introduce sorrow and attempt to provoke anger what has happenned to me? how could i have so rashly exposed an unprotected stem, when i know the artery to my heart, my life blood is in danger? my tree has yet infinate undamaged buds and blossoms, but that does not negate the value of that one and my tree aches the loss gently my patiece pulls from roots to let my tree drink a long breath of acceptance to move on and grow, yet always hold a treasured knot to hold her rotting bud that was never realized into a blossom, never passed on her seed of wisdom. dream of peace of mind my leaves, and rustle whispered songs of life with each breeze. kwadjo, it is never safe for me to write to a person when i feel like this. you have many a time said that ou are always here for me to talk to but actions and words do not always coincide. accusitions i will try to avoid but i cannot avoid accusing myself of imatience, attatchment, and the inability to clear my mind and sleep right now. all i wanted was to see you and now, but for lorena, i wish i had just stayed home. im sorry baby, i am not being fair. listening to the birds, elody
Jaded Minds eyes have been painted the tainted color of crack why didn't you smack me or maybe you did I just couldn't see from such great preasure of my delusive lid I sacraficed my purity to comfort someone And its less than an obligation for me to comfort you you who pulled me out of a pit of knives painted blue You who saw beyond my death and brougth me to life And I fuck you then leave You Fuck you then leave I trained my hole life to live to the best comforts of others and I didn't see you someone who came to see me I couldn't see wow, one more step youv'e pushed me up Much thanks chap ~Kwadjo
What the fuck children Youve got such luck to be in existence at all Yet is seems Im hearing that all we can do is fall Youve been given a beautiful earth and a chance of birth and the blaring sirens of GOD's phone call It doesn't even make sense to ball Now sure I made a few mistakes in my day and my opression be it at different levels still exists But fear rage and irritation are only elements of our imaginations We feed um we seed them But thats only cause we dont read them Or else we would find they dont make much sense How far is fear gonna get you Just clinch your fist and send a try and you can bet truth Rage will only take this life and sumbit it to strife, you can just shrug your shoulders and drop all the bolders Irritation thats just the pride you hold for your nation or The plucibo affect possibly creates an ego, if someone keeps poke en you , dont get upset its just some one poken you Drop the drama and enjoy planet earth while you can ~KWADJO
im soft and hard soft sentimentality bringing tears to my eyes hard work rough sweat dust clings like a grey guise im cool and warm river mountaincooled rapids tumbling from the stones sunwarmed earth heat seep to and from my bones to myself i deny the depths of my affection dont ask myself why i feel this connection even think to try denial and rejection but i cant fight the inevitable i can only bite the beautiful so my, irresitible please be nice dont encourage undeniable questionabe vice help this be sustainnable simple beans and rice allow us to be neutral dont roll the dice playing with chance at the wrong time is not smart let us not practice on the edge of a dime the forbiddon art instead play like kitten in fresh sparkeling snow finnally in mittens, a beauty you can roll in low unlike flowers, you can sit in safe to go with your flow now you know you have been bitten watch my heart glow i float and sink up dreaming canopy and cumulous cloud down into cushion moss humming aloud im new and worn fresh like spring leaves tender pastel glow like old shoes conformed lovingly to each toe ~ELODY
Hmm. interesting I enter resting and found my blessing Where I can sit float listen and die Umm... Outside says blue skys easy breeze and reaching tress Nothing wrong no Like umm... Lightening chattering air molecules to flutter like leaves but their not scared but dancing so I need to do the same Just go with the flow Umm we are the we are the we are the we are the we I am the me are the I was what am the here is the we are the now The you are the you were the will be cause can be so stand free and hand me hello AAhhh ELODY gruff cause I cant stop seeing you and me freeing like the sun in the sky OK? But my bottom less pit of dipsair never wants me to care, safely Im afraid to focus, on anything, especially anyone Im afraid I can give in to love up love down and around with no sound Or I can be a brother walking on this ever lasting tredmil Chucking and jive keeping aliving surfing the riding tickling the dragon It seems youve asked me to care, And for some one like you I will dare, Even thoguh I truly love laze-faire. So in return I ask you to turn your focus on full burn. and melt away a the sheets which block our horizans. Lets talk about the rules care free and front dipping inifnance for you, so find ours, chains and keys please ~KWADJO
with what words did i seem to? i certainly did not mean to i did not mean to ask to ask of you a task a task of you to care of you to dare to care for me what do you mean for me to focus? what, on us? chains and keys, what chains, and please if chains then please yes be keys keys that free, chains denote slavery, captivity. let me tell you these these dreams thease dreams i fear two nights ago i dreamed, i know a restless mind in humidity dream lacking tranquility in which i lacked the ability to reason. pregnant, i was. carrying our child. coming, a storm was, tropical and wild. from easy inland safty, i was drawn outside for some compelling reason, i wanted to ride i walked, waded then swam i tried fearlessly, pointlessly, hopelessly and happiliy out to sea when i turned to go, it was no longer at hand, rejected by the undertoe, could not reach sand by strong deep flow, away from my land i could not go back, the sky and water turning black and i still with separate life growing inside not a care in the world, no worry abides what did it mean, those breakers cresting over me undulating ocean strength pulling me from safety and i with not a care? i did not dare to worry, and caught up in the flurry i consistantly and illogically went straight for the dangerous i did not even wait for the ominous electical storm of the tromical form to come to me. what means this? what means you? is it not possible, to brother sister walk together and still have the comfort of playful touch because this seems to translate into way too much sensual CAN stop before sexual and for all your talk of walk it is you who makes the transition and i who resists with inhibition What, presicely am i asking of you, and what are you of me? i hope for no unwanted chains in our future i will never ask of you what you fear that is not fair and i would not bear that, so promise me any bonds of yours draw strenght from honesty in or out, asks yours. neither asks mine. is solidly on all fours in between- is that precariously unstable, a fable, incapable? it is not such a thin line. enlighten me to your impressions or repressions ill see you sooner than you might think. ~ELODY
How many conversations Does it take For an action to result? How many poems Are written.. Yet no one is at fault Let me just say, Listen Because we mean what we say It seemed so clear to me Listen I mean what I say It is never idle conversation When we speak of our beliefs Listen… Listen Our words and lyrics both protested But our bodies contested Listen.. I didn’t understand Why it took a witness for my words to sink truth There is no blame Just misunderstanding Just dance in the rain Now that we begin comprehending I still don’t agree with love in pain If you love me no ending Don’t leave bruising stain From marks on my body There is no gain Wrestling kitties They don’t bite to hurt Sweet littlies cuties They nibble and snap My darling beauties don’t sink in teeth Im not yours because I dotn belive in causing physical pain Unnecessary pain There is no solid reason to learn to endure Unnecessary pain You not mine because I need sobriety Satisfy my intellectual yearning Maintain critique of society Life is for me constant learning The world is to be explored not conquered To be absorbed not manipulated To be encouraged not destroyed Ignorance may be bliss But even if knowledge brings pain I will gladly accept it If there is humanitarian gain So I will climb my mountains, and help on the way And at the base you will watch Bringing peace to a few who stray Down to you Found to you How does this sound to you? You, human, I love you. What a life we could create A beautiful being we could make. But we will leave it for another day To say if an us-child will Cosmically ecologically peacefully lovingly Ever occur, exist, create. ~ELDOY