Soul Sista Versus Soul Brotha

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Zion, May 5, 2005.

  1. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Don't listen to anyone and do your own thing. You've got a wicked binging style. My only crit as of now is spelling. Haven't got around to reading everything, attention spans being not all that large but I've read a few and certainly hearing your message.
     
  2. Zion

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    Thank you Kitty, Yeah Ill take to mind some proffessional mannerism. Love you. Keep keep that litterbox overflowen. ;0p _'0 D
     
  3. Zion

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    Nice call kid, its hard to see what others do sometimes, but yeah when I look at em i can see how some of mine could be broken due to their structure. Keep kickin it boss
     
  4. Zion

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    punch kick
    Punch gets the kickin with the
    Punch like a kick
    with the punch back flipin and a

    Happy and true skys
    let the colors provide
    something abstract while organic
    coming from all sides cause were looking inside

    add existence and you got the presistance of our essense

    listen to the lessons as they only spoke of blessings
    Sure somethings may be depressing but thats only cause ya stressing
    Things like you want their strings to pop
    you dont wanna drop off this smiling face in disgrace of whats great

    call it earth or birth or worth but it couldn't be worse then life in the inverse
    which would reverse this whole process of this continual burst
    in the first place
    which would erease the constast pace of the universe' taste
    which would waste the warm storm of sun rays which replays in the lives of every positive vibe,
    Positive vibes which provide you with life and conquere all strife
    Which puts your foot to the left of mine, as we spin flip and kick simotainously as if our minds were intertwined
    climbing mount shining whiles signing peace on the tai-lind tribe end
    when with perfect timing your reclining on the fining tiding of the clouds in skyland
    all whiles our hands remaine combining to destroy the confining grips of our spiritual blindings
    As our compaionships asks "Why you Lying" becuase our superstyling moves keep tying knots like Natty dread locks cause we rock the streets with beats so heavy they have to sign levys to keep our feet from turnings roads into teddy bears,
    see our ineivitible flow was bron ready to go, like a steady flow even though we both got our own ways to show the same ocean knows
    which rose from a rose and arose a rose

    ~KWADJO
     
  5. Zion

    Zion Member

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    from play arose kick flip prose
    from clay apposed slip drip rose
    from bay a hose sip dip flows
    from a day of lows hip lip pose
    from hay wind blows snip blip nose
    from away glows a rip kip grows
    in prose a rose grows and glows nose strike pose words like flows
    and he knows the flamanco flamingo
    clap beat sticado stop
    heat stilletto stomp
    beak snap notes rap
    music rise flap
    winged skies lap
    up water like flutter
    dress her hike ruffle
    deep red flower lips
    sweep feather long slips
    of grace curve
    weather song taste swerve
    of arms fly hips sing nerves
    and neck knows sense bird pink
    color motion do not think
    just drink from the music
    sink into candle wick
    rise in dancing flames
    leave the games
    this is a life that is a lake of pink birds that rise
    and fly as one
    filling the sky with sunrise


    ~ELODY
     
  6. Zion

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    Woah my toe just throw a show when it belowed go to a bow and whiles so slow that bow went with the flow as is spun into an o
     
  7. Zion

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    QUite an interesting paradox ain it.
    Write some words which havent been painted
    Almost as if poetry can some days be pain-ed
    I would like to believe that I can infitely do certain things
    And thanks to nature for its possible tidings
    I can
    So what is that
    A beliefe in the word laziness
    Or intolerence
    Or I am conditioned too complain ness
    You never believed it when they said
    You can't belive everything you read see hear and I would now say especially think
    Ive always believed in positivty
    And yeah for that very reason of negativity will only leave you roadless, and hopeless
    for that negative symbol isn't a minus for no reason
    But yeah brain dead possitivity keeps you the moment and happiness alive.
     
  8. VanAstral

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    indigenous people protest
    nuclear proliferation, but
    when intergalactic colonialists arrive…

    tops!
     
  9. Zion

    Zion Member

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    Only the Gods' appreciate what they can, and you my friend are the grateful dead.
     
  10. Zion

    Zion Member

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    the difficult questions to answer
    of whats right and wrong i swear
    are always shades of grey.
    stick to this value i say
    but at the expense of anonother?
    to choose between morals is
    sacrificing a sister for a brother
    to save both siblings, this
    is not always an option
    "put your values in order"
    a method up for adoption
    but blurry is the border
    between sequential morals
    and overlap is unavoidable.
    choosing self over all
    to maintain neutrality?
    sometimes calm passivity
    is a step backwards for community
    then, resisting opression
    or lifting from depression
    (which coincide with my ideology)
    say that conflict is needed
    see then this progression must be heeded
    it is a delicate balance
    a fine line to walk
    to never be a hypocrit
    especially with the way we all talk

    as i said,
    sticking to one value sometimes
    means sacrificing another
    and putting them in an order of importance
    may be the toughest thing of all
    attepting to define them means surely we fall
    because each situation provides new contradiction
    so carefully thought out diction
    to plan out this fiction of alphabatized definitions
    may only build up walls
    blocking the potential for a "perfect" choice
    because no matter what you voice
    in real life there will rarely be
    anyhting other than shades of gray
    regardless of how convincing is your say
    it will contradict something said in a earler day
    im not trying to dissuade you
    from discussing your morals
    only realistically i persuade you
    to hold them closly and tighly
    while defining them gently
    and giveing them room to breath and live
    leave them a chance to grow and the freedom to give you
    thier wisdom.

    ~ELODY
     
  11. Zion

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    I spoke too soon love
    When I wrote by moon love-
    Of a broken flower bud
    A lost drop of petal blood.
    But a sentence or two of appreciation
    a simple wish for a communication
    and my mind was able to rest,
    sweet words of consolation best.
    our eloquent companionship
    caressed again by whispering lip
    the doubts had not been justified
    but neither was the evening bonified
    startled rest left doubt and confusion
    brief sexual jest left frustrated illusion
    then alone to struggle against the half-heard
    my mind could neither grasp nor release the words
    I wished only for the warmth of your presence
    my body exhausted and needing condolence
    so that is why I wrote of a snapped stem
    and now I write that I do not condemn
    I learned a lesson of not withholding
    Now the distraction of mind is unfolding
    I forgive, forget and apologize
    And interaction is just a little more wise.
    ~ELODY
     
  12. Zion

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    Wow, pernesia
    pow first seize ya
    to the right and left
    whats righteous now
    good whats bad was left behind
    sunset trail under vails of climbing sticks with fire paper shining from their extentions
    painting the mood of a ripe orange and bannana up the trail
    to light...
    black incumpusing purple to speak of enchanting fantasies of stories entervolving rounds within each spray of divine lights
    which flow as smoothly and just as mightly humble and rumbling as the blue slash turquoist oceans nears by I think to the right
    I think to the right where my home in the holy light surrouunded by goldy sights
    never begins and ends.
    ~KWADJO
     
  13. Zion

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    there is a flower bud in my spine
    whose stem, so supple and crisp with new dawn
    has snapped
    her turgid health has worked against her, for had she been wilted
    her flex would not break.
    flower, delicate premature petals of pastel green, still encased in a protecting
    hands of leaf,
    these delicate petals will never grow now
    will not flourish into blossom and fade into seed
    bud will die before its time
    this broken stem
    has left a hole for demon thought
    to slip inside my plant body
    demons that question what is
    that introduce sorrow
    and attempt to provoke anger
    what has happenned to me? how could i have so rashly exposed an unprotected
    stem, when i know the artery to my heart,
    my life blood
    is in danger?
    my tree has yet infinate undamaged buds and blossoms,
    but that does not negate the value of that one
    and my tree aches the loss gently
    my patiece pulls from roots to let my tree drink a long breath of acceptance
    to move on and grow, yet always hold a treasured knot to hold her rotting bud
    that was never realized into a blossom, never passed on her seed of wisdom.
    dream of peace of mind my leaves, and rustle whispered songs of life with each
    breeze.


    kwadjo, it is never safe for me to write to a person when i feel like this. you
    have many a time said that ou are always here for me to talk to but actions and
    words do not always coincide. accusitions i will try to avoid but i cannot
    avoid accusing myself of imatience, attatchment, and the inability to clear my
    mind and sleep right now. all i wanted was to see you and now, but for lorena,
    i wish i had just stayed home. im sorry baby, i am not being fair.
    listening to the birds, elody
     
  14. Zion

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    Jaded
    Minds eyes have been painted
    the tainted color of crack
    why didn't you smack me
    or maybe you did
    I just couldn't see from such great preasure of my delusive lid
    I sacraficed my purity to comfort someone
    And its less than an obligation for me to comfort you
    you who pulled me out of a pit of knives painted blue
    You who saw beyond my death and brougth me to life
    And I fuck you then leave
    You
    Fuck
    you
    then leave
    I trained my hole life to live to the best comforts of others
    and I didn't see you
    someone who came to see me
    I couldn't see
    wow, one more step youv'e pushed me up
    Much thanks chap
    ~Kwadjo
     
  15. Zion

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    What the fuck children
    Youve got such luck to be in existence at all
    Yet is seems Im hearing that all we can do is fall
    Youve been given a beautiful earth and a chance of birth
    and the blaring sirens of GOD's phone call
    It doesn't even make sense to ball
    Now sure I made a few mistakes in my day
    and my opression be it at different levels still exists
    But fear rage and irritation are only elements of our imaginations
    We feed um
    we seed them
    But thats only cause we dont read them
    Or else we would find they dont make much sense
    How far is fear gonna get you
    Just clinch your fist and send a try and you can bet truth
    Rage will only take this life and sumbit it to strife,
    you can just shrug your shoulders and drop all the bolders
    Irritation thats just the pride you hold for your nation
    or
    The plucibo affect possibly creates an ego,
    if someone keeps poke en you , dont get upset its just some one poken you
    Drop the drama and enjoy planet earth while you can
    ~KWADJO
     
  16. Zion

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    im soft and hard
    soft sentimentality bringing tears to my eyes
    hard work rough sweat dust clings like a grey guise
    im cool and warm
    river mountaincooled rapids tumbling from the stones
    sunwarmed earth heat seep to and from my bones

    to myself i deny
    the depths of my affection
    dont ask myself why
    i feel this connection
    even think to try
    denial and rejection

    but i cant fight the inevitable
    i can only bite the beautiful

    so my, irresitible
    please be nice
    dont encourage undeniable
    questionabe vice
    help this be sustainnable
    simple beans and rice
    allow us to be neutral
    dont roll the dice

    playing with chance at the wrong time
    is not smart
    let us not practice on the edge of a dime
    the forbiddon art

    instead play like kitten
    in fresh sparkeling snow
    finnally in mittens,
    a beauty you can roll in low
    unlike flowers, you can sit in
    safe to go with your flow
    now you know you have been bitten
    watch my heart glow

    i float and sink
    up dreaming canopy and cumulous cloud
    down into cushion moss humming aloud
    im new and worn
    fresh like spring leaves tender pastel glow
    like old shoes conformed lovingly to each toe

    ~ELODY


     
  17. Zion

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    Hmm. interesting
    I enter resting and found my blessing
    Where I can sit float listen and die
    Umm...
    Outside says blue skys easy breeze
    and reaching tress
    Nothing wrong no
    Like umm...
    Lightening chattering air molecules to flutter like leaves but their not scared
    but dancing
    so I need to do the same
    Just go with the flow
    Umm we are the we are the we are the we are the we
    I am the me are the I was what am the here is the we are the now
    The you are the you were the will be cause can be so stand free and hand me
    hello
    AAhhh ELODY gruff cause I cant stop seeing you and me freeing like the sun in
    the sky
    OK?
    But my bottom less pit of dipsair never wants me to care, safely
    Im afraid to focus, on anything, especially anyone
    Im afraid
    I can give in to love up love down and around with no sound
    Or I can be a brother walking on this ever lasting tredmil
    Chucking and jive keeping aliving surfing the riding
    tickling the dragon
    It seems youve asked me to care, And for some one like you I will dare, Even
    thoguh I truly love laze-faire.
    So in return I ask you to turn your focus on full burn. and melt away a the
    sheets which block our horizans.
    Lets talk about the rules care free and front
    dipping inifnance for you, so find ours, chains and keys please
    ~KWADJO
     
  18. Zion

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    with what words did i seem to?
    i certainly did not mean to
    i did not mean to ask
    to ask of you a task
    a task of you to care
    of you to dare to care for me
    what do you mean for me
    to focus? what, on us?
    chains and keys, what chains, and please
    if chains then please yes be keys
    keys that free, chains denote slavery, captivity.

    let me tell you these
    these dreams
    thease dreams i fear
    two nights ago
    i dreamed, i know
    a restless mind in humidity
    dream lacking tranquility
    in which i lacked the ability
    to reason.

    pregnant, i was. carrying our child.
    coming, a storm was, tropical and wild.
    from easy inland safty, i was drawn outside
    for some compelling reason, i wanted to ride
    i walked, waded then swam i tried
    fearlessly, pointlessly, hopelessly and happiliy out to sea
    when i turned to go, it was no longer at hand,
    rejected by the undertoe, could not reach sand
    by strong deep flow, away from my land
    i could not go back, the sky and water turning black
    and i still with separate life growing inside
    not a care in the world, no worry abides
    what did it mean, those breakers cresting over me
    undulating ocean strength pulling me from safety
    and i with not a care?
    i did not dare to worry,
    and caught up in the flurry
    i consistantly and illogically
    went straight for the dangerous
    i did not even wait for the ominous
    electical storm
    of the tromical form
    to come to me.

    what means this? what means you?
    is it not possible, to brother sister walk together
    and still have the comfort of playful touch
    because this seems to translate into way too much
    sensual CAN stop before sexual
    and for all your talk of walk
    it is you who makes the transition
    and i who resists with inhibition

    What, presicely am i asking of you,
    and what are you of me?
    i hope for no unwanted chains in our future
    i will never ask of you what you fear
    that is not fair and i would not bear
    that, so promise me
    any bonds of yours draw strenght from honesty
    in or out, asks yours.
    neither asks mine.
    is solidly on all fours
    in between- is that precariously
    unstable, a fable, incapable?
    it is not such a thin line.

    enlighten me to your impressions or repressions
    ill see you sooner than you might think.
    ~ELODY
     
  19. Zion

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    How many conversations
    Does it take
    For an action to result?
    How many poems
    Are written..
    Yet no one is at fault

    Let me just say,
    Listen
    Because we mean what we say
    It seemed so clear to me
    Listen
    I mean what I say
    It is never idle conversation
    When we speak of our beliefs
    Listen…
    Listen
    Our words and lyrics both protested
    But our bodies contested
    Listen..

    I didn’t understand
    Why it took a witness for my words to sink truth
    There is no blame
    Just misunderstanding
    Just dance in the rain
    Now that we begin comprehending

    I still don’t agree with love in pain
    If you love me no ending
    Don’t leave bruising stain
    From marks on my body
    There is no gain

    Wrestling kitties
    They don’t bite to hurt
    Sweet littlies cuties
    They nibble and snap
    My darling beauties
    don’t sink in teeth

    Im not yours because I dotn belive in causing physical pain
    Unnecessary pain
    There is no solid reason to learn to endure
    Unnecessary pain

    You not mine because I need sobriety
    Satisfy my intellectual yearning
    Maintain critique of society
    Life is for me constant learning
    The world is to be explored not conquered
    To be absorbed not manipulated
    To be encouraged not destroyed
    Ignorance may be bliss
    But even if knowledge brings pain
    I will gladly accept it
    If there is humanitarian gain
    So I will climb my mountains, and help on the way
    And at the base you will watch
    Bringing peace to a few who stray
    Down to you
    Found to you
    How does this sound to you?

    You, human, I love you.
    What a life we could create
    A beautiful being we could make.
    But we will leave it for another day
    To say if an us-child will
    Cosmically ecologically peacefully lovingly
    Ever occur, exist, create.
    ~ELDOY
     
  20. loveflower

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    wow, wow :eek:
     
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