Rhymes or Reason

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  1. BJintheUK

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    Friday today, and I thought I'd write summat diff'rent for a change.

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    It's Friday night and strictly for a change
    I thought I'd write an ode that doesn't rhyme
    so though it won't be easy writing words that just don't scan
    I'll see if I can put down something new

    Phew! That was close, you know that I was tempted
    I nearly rhymed that last line in the stanza
    I struggled with my conscience for a while
    then said to myself 'sod it, let 'em wait!'

    so now I'll see what else that I can think of
    that won't be quite so hard to fit in here
    it's getting late and now I'm getting tired
    but come tomorrow I'll be rested, honest!

    then I'll get back to rhyming words once more
    I'll put them in rows all lined up quite neatly
    just like I meant to do it all along
    you'd think that it was just a little brain storm

    the last four lines always seem to be the hardest
    the ending's never easy to plan you see
    for the rhymes just keep on coming even through the longest night
    till they jump out from my mind on to the keyboard

    Goodnight!

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    See you tomorrow! :)
     
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    Aww Good Night my lovely. xxxxx
     
  3. BJintheUK

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    Today's Saturday, today's Saturday, and Saturday is ... Is everybody 'appy, you bet yer life we are!

    Anyway, here's today's little ditty, enjoy!

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    Saturday the ninth, could this be the gate
    to escape from reality and into the strange
    world of a fantasy where everything's great
    and the good, bad and ugly are home on the range?

    the world in a hand basket trips out to hell
    while the church wardens wring their gnarled hands in the cold
    and the old man of Hoy has a story to tell
    of the times before he grew so tall and so old

    this is the world as is now for the people
    a mish mash of tales and fluff Peter Rabbit
    could use as his tuft to tell all the sheeple
    to wander the hills seeking something to grab at

    a lifetime of stories, corked up in a bottle
    that's thrown like a lifeline way out in the waves
    to carry the message so safe in its capsule
    to far distant shores and unknown enclaves

    where strangers will read them and spark in their minds
    a new world of wonder to keep them amused
    like peeling an orange that's loose in its rind
    the fruit has a taste at once strong yet diffused

    so take out a segment and look at the colour
    then into your mouth pop the sweet tangy fruit
    the textures and taste on your tongue as you devour
    the flesh seem so naughty and yet feel so right

    these tales are the grist to the mill of our lives
    as we grow and mature from innocence swept
    into adult worlds we must all struggle and strive
    feeling never the expert and always inept

    just children we sail out to sea in our boat
    with an owl and a pussycat there as our crew
    these memories sparkle the tides as we float
    and drift out from ancient rhymes into the new

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    Naughty and nautical seemed to flow together well in this verse. See you tomorrow, if I can get back to dry land that is!! :)
     
  4. BJintheUK

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    Today's Sunday the 10th, and here's todays missive.

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    January tenth, it's a week and a half
    since the new year, it hardly seems real
    that the calendar's turned again on our behalf
    just as though it were pinned to a wheel

    for the seasons roll round in a circle
    they come and they go every year
    they mark our lives out as they shuffle about
    and remind us with laughter and tears

    that our lives are forever governed
    by forces outside our control
    they trap and then catch us to pummel and match us
    to fit in the right pigeonhole

    sometimes we're pulled out and admired
    by those who'd our virtues extol
    sometimes we are led as though drawn by a thread
    to get close to a looming black hole

    there to join with the other ones who
    have come to stand pale and aghast
    I'm sure that one day I might even see you
    though that fateful day may be our last

    still the seasons continue to march on
    driving all those whose lives are lived there
    maintaining the peace as our thoughts are released
    and the world rotates cleansing the air

    for the atmosphere is a vacuum
    it sweeps up those thoughts we discard
    and gathers them in where the air becomes thin
    to a cloud for to save and safeguard

    so don't be sad if you've forgotten
    all the good times you had in the past
    at the end you're allowed to ascend through that cloud
    and you'll regain them all at the last

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    See you Monday!
     
  5. BJintheUK

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    Well, today's little offering is all about the Romans and children and sport. How did I manage that you may wonder? It all comes down to the fact that there are eleven people in a football team, and in a cricket team, and January is named after the Roman god Janus. As to where the children come into it, well they form the sports teams of eleven per side, and when small they played on the stones of what was once a Roman villa in what later became the kingdom of Wessex. All this came out of my mind this morning as I sat here and looked out of the window, and daydreamed of being able to go out of the house once more some time in the future. Assuming I'll still be here in that future, because it's getting very depressing being told to stay at home all the time. It's almost like house arrest for a crime I haven't committed.

    Anyway, have a read of the poem while we're all still allowed to communicate via the internet, because even that could be taken away from us the way things are going!

    Oh, and by the way, I know there's more than eleven in a rugby team, but I invoked poetic licence to make it all scan. :)

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    January Eleven, sounds like a sports team
    who knows, there just might be one hiding away
    from a village called January it'd most likely seem
    near a Roman villa down old Wessex way

    I can just see it now the small village hall
    next to the Norman church with graves all around
    and the post office outside the old Roman wall
    that marked out the villa's ancient grounds

    and inside the wall the grass is kept neat
    mowed every week to keep it quite short
    so the paying visitors won't get wet feet
    as they stroll around where once rich Romans held court

    but before the authorities rescued the site
    I'll bet children of all ages played in the rubble
    the villagers' playground and theirs as of right
    where the kids could all play yet stay out of trouble

    away from the road where the big lorries ran
    and during the war the Americans came
    to play their own war games, as only they can
    with their tanks and artillery spouting bright flame

    when peacetime resumed and the parish was poor
    that's when the NT came and offered a chance
    to rebuild what had once been a palace before
    they promised the whole area would be enhanced

    so years of hard labour thusly ensued
    to turn piles of rubble all covered with weeds
    once more to a pleasant place rightly imbued
    with historical overtones, a palace indeed

    with fame came more people to live near the site
    and the village soon filled with new children to play
    on the old Roman stones as their playground of right
    even though the NT tried to make them all pay

    and those children grew up into sporty young teens
    who needed to practice their newly honed skills
    of football and cricket and running in teams
    so new pitches were laid in the rolling green hills

    and now we may have a January Eleven
    of boys and of girls for both soccer and rugby
    with members left over for January Sevens
    well in my creative mind they all could be

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    See you tomorrow! (hopefully?) :)
     
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    OOh Thank-you xxxx
     
  7. wilsjane

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    Well that is a relief.

    You asked me to post the first thing that came into my head and I just had an image of you running around shooting a few unwanted admirers. :)
     
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    hahahaha xxxx
     
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  9. BJintheUK

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    It's the twelfth today, a Tuesday, and it's raining outside. Not wanting to make the day even more dismal than it already is, I tried to imagine the rain as a falling of new life onto the waiting ground, that's eager to swallow it all up, and use it to build new inspiration for an otherwise parched landscape.

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    Today is the twelfth and not quite a fortnight
    another two days to make it two weeks
    so what shall I write about now you may wonder
    as thoughts from my curious mind slowly weep

    they cry like the new rain that falls on the desert
    that's yearning for learning and aching to feel
    they fall like the raindrops that quench the great thirst
    of the new life that stirs as the rain waters heal

    the barren and cold wastes of meaningless thought
    that wander and roam through the world of the night
    waiting and watching for some sacred sign of
    a new dawn of reason that arrives with the light

    but the germs of the new must take their time to grow
    while the soil of creation awaits the rich food
    as the water seeps onward through cracks it will flow
    showered down from the heavens the meadows to flood
    the fields of the grass lands, the grazing for those
    who would wander through them, their thoughts to renew
    that inspire us to think and imagine the world
    with a new light, a muse our tight bounds to undo

    and let all our creation spill out on the highway
    let the traffic of life fill the ribbon of slate
    that flows through the world like a blazing hot torch
    that will save us from ignorance, show us our fate

    for the power of stories is there for us all
    the written and acted out script of our lives
    we see in the mirror our private existence
    as onward we ever must struggle and strive

    worry not if creation has stopped for a short time
    the new mental offspring are soon on their way
    new thoughts and new ideas burst up through the soil
    to reach for the sunlight that bathes us each day

    and at last we can rest from the toil as we lay
    eating and drinking our fill from the well
    that springs up new tales to tell every day
    as though from the glorious heavens they fell

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    See you tomorrow! :)
     
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    YOU will xxxx
     
  11. BJintheUK

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    It's Wednesday Jan 13th today, and I've spent the day getting my rather specialised machining tools together ready for tomorrow, when I drive down to Poole, to work on a boat engine. Why do I do this you may ask? Well, I happen to have the special tools needed to do the machining on the engine that's necessary to refurbish it properly. I'm one of the few people left who know how to use the tooling, and who're prepared to go out to do the necessary work on the engine at the customer's premises. When it all gets a bit too much I'll see about selling the machine tools on and hopefully teach the buyer how to use them as well. That way the skills won't be lost and people will be able to continue using the ageing engines fitted to old cars, motorbikes and boats.

    Anyway, here's today's ditty.

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    Thirteenth today, that's one and three
    add them together and they make four
    take the one away you're left with two
    so tell me people what to do?

    should I leave the numbers this time
    and just accept them as they are
    or try to play with them some more
    and mess them up as with my mind?

    it's hard to think of what to write
    when head is pounding out the beat
    of tired eyes and aching feet
    perhaps I'll have an early night

    and rest my body goodness knows
    it needs the rest as do my thoughts
    like lines of crosses mixed with noughts
    help untie my crossed up toes

    the cool ev'ning is moving on
    to the night that's waiting for it
    sinking to the shining floor it
    slides into dark oblivion

    and there to rest until the dawn
    the morn will break upon the dark
    then I might stroll around the park
    the well groomed trees and perfect lawns

    will welcome me with open arms
    arms that have held many things
    from lover's hair to diamond rings
    and kept them all away from harm

    so dream along now as we rest
    relax into the old armchair
    don't try to work now, don't you dare
    put up your feet, you know it's best

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    Don't work too hard now! Take it easy till tomorrow. :)
     
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    Hey I live near Poole!
     
  13. BJintheUK

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    Candy Gal, yes you live in Bournemouth. I drove past there at around 11pm last night as I headed home from Poole. I didn't get home till 1.30am and then had to unload the car of all the tooling I took with me to do the work at the boatyard. So I didn't get to bed till after 2am. As such I'm rather tired, with a headache, and I didn't get a chance to write my daily poem last night. So I'll just have to write two of them today to make up for the shortfall.

    I have a story to tell about the last time me and the missus went to Bournemouth. We went along to the beach at Sandbanks and bumped into Harry Redknapp! He was busy filming for that series of programmes he did about Sandbanks that was shown last year (or was it the year before?), but he made the time to say hello and talk to us anyway. Lovely bloke!

    I'll put up a poem for yesterday later on today, and another one for today after that. Bye for now!
     
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    Okay, so I managed to drum up a few lines that explain where Thursday went, for me that is. Your experience of the day was probably different from mine, but that's hardly surprising as I had a very busy day working on a big six cylinder diesel engine on a huge floating forty foot long fibreglass gin palace that has two of these massive six litre engines to power it around. I only worked on one of them, as only one engine was being refurbished. The other one was re-furbed about three years ago apparently, and so is fine. Anyway, I got up at 5.30am, had an early breakfast, loaded the car up with the rather special boring machine I own, then drove the 120 miles down from London to Poole, and a boatyard where the gin palace was out of the water and sitting on the concrete yard. There it took four of us to lift the heavy machine the ten feet or so from the ground up to the height of the rear deck, then into the cabin to lift the floor panels away so that I could work on the six cylinders of the engine.

    With three separate cuts required to get each cylinder bored out enough to take the sleeves that were to be fitted, it took eighteen cuts overall to get the work done. Then we had to get the machine back out of the engine bay, out of the cabin (into the rain in the dark) then lower it down again to ground level so that I could put it back in the car, and then drive the 120 miles home.

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    Thursday the fourteenth where have you gone
    the rain and the fog that hemmed in the day
    slowly gave way
    to sporadic showers that wetted the ground
    as I looked out for the road signs
    not always found
    pointing me west to a boatyard in Poole
    where an engine awaited me there in its bay
    the cylinders worn beyond easy repair
    needed new liners, that's why I was there
    to bore out the cylinders for fitting new sleeves

    my machine's too heavy for one man alone
    I needed some muscle to help with the lifting
    the boat owner's son and the owner himself
    both pitched in to get my machine through the door
    then into the cabin and under the floor
    to where the huge engines sat stripped of their bits
    I machined out the cylinders three cuts for each
    then honed out the surfaces till the sleeves fit
    and with it all done then home from the coast
    I didn't get home until Thursday was past

    So Friday the fifteenth barged its way in
    while I emptied the car and stowed all my tools
    then off to my bed to catch up with my sleep
    my weariness dragging me into my dreams
    Nod is a land I've got to know well
    as my head hits the pillow I'll bid you farewell

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    The poem for today follows, so don't touch that dial!
     
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    I see him lots in Sandbanks. xxx
    Next time after this damn Pandemic, we must all meet up. xxxx
     
  16. BJintheUK

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    Hello again, as promised, here's Friday's poem, a bit late I know, but better late than never, as they say.

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    Friday the fifteenth, oh what a day
    birthdays for some
    'Happy Birthday Tom!'
    and time marches on
    and on and on

    a frost is a coming I'm sure of the signs
    perhaps we'll get snow, it's a sign of the times
    the bitterness burns at our fingers and toes
    remember to keep all of the windows closed

    and doors must be shut to keep out the cold
    I can feel myself ache as I slowly grow old
    and the sun shivers silently out in the blue
    as it watches us move about here on the ground
    but its glance is fleeting as the world moves round
    in a circle, now here's an idea a strange notion
    for our planet is in perpetual motion

    it's a state that the scientists say just can't be
    yet it is for all and sundry to see
    forever it spins and will always continue
    you know that I'm right what I'm telling you is true

    and when the sun dies and our world it is drained
    even then it will turn round again and again
    until finally swallowed by our dying star
    be assured of this fact wherever you are

    so although the time marches on to its beat
    through winter's chill and summer's heat
    the seasons will come and the seasons will go
    and it's late now so I'll just say cheerio!

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    See you tomorrow! :)
     
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    Didn't know I could predict the weather did you? Well, when I woke up this morning it was snowing outside, so here's some nonsense about snow, and bad weather in general.

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    Opened the curtains and what do I see
    the world has turned white but how can that be
    it was only last night that I said it might snow
    now I'm being blinded by what's down below

    but wait just a minute there don't be too hasty
    it's raining outside so the snow'll soon melt
    then it'll all turn to slush that can be quite nasty
    I hope that the rain soon turns heavy and pelts

    then the snow will all drain away out of my sight
    and I won't have to contemplate wearing my boots
    coz I really can't walk in them try as I might
    I look like a bigfoot who's in a bad mood

    all trudging and swearing and cursing quite loud
    as I slide from the pavement out into the road
    in a cartoon I'd walk along under a cloud
    filled with lightning and thunder about to explode

    with my shoulders all hunched up close to my head
    as though they were earrings that flattened out sideways
    but they're heavy to me and they feel just like lead
    and if I get famous they might start a new craze

    so soon all the people would hunch their way round
    as they shop in the high street or go underground
    to seek out the bargains that hide in the markets
    all looking like coat hangers bought on a budget

    but listen to me getting silly and soft
    you know I don't mean it I'm having a laugh
    till my ribs they all ache and I choke and I cough
    so I think I'd best stop now and go run a bath

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    LOVE THEM ALL SO MUCH. XXX
     
  19. BJintheUK

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    Hello, today's poem is a little longer than most of those I've done recently, but I hope you won't get bored reading it. Anyway, here it is.

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    Sunday today and I had a lie in
    it helps me remember which day it is
    if I got up as normal I'd soon begin
    to forget which day's which and get in a tizz

    so I stayed on in bed till my back really hurt
    then got up and took my special Sunday pill
    then wait half an hour before quenching my thirst
    so the chemicals can coat my old bones while I'm still

    after that it was breakfast, but not until twelve
    I don't eat in the mornings I rest my digestion
    then to fill up my tum in the pantry I delve
    for some ham and some coleslaw, a salad insurrection

    the afternoon filled with internet queries
    about aliens and moonshine and other such things
    people will think I'm away with the fairies
    perhaps they're not wrong while I'm clicking the links

    but the interesting things are all there for the taking
    and reading the articles keeps me awake
    if I didn't do that I'd be in the chair dozing
    and wasting the day, that would be a mistake

    for time is the essence of what life's about
    we're stuck here at home for the duration it seems
    until the all clear sounds and we're allowed out
    to get back to normal and chasing our dreams

    our wants and desires that are just out of reach
    we can see them in colour in glossy paged brochures
    the beautiful bodies all bronzed on the beach
    if only I looked like the gods in the pictures

    sadly I don't, I'm really no oil painting
    no Salvador Dali would want to paint me
    he'd look and who knows, he might even be waiting
    for me to release him and set his eyes free

    to look for the beauty in other strange things
    not sorry old men who would just sit and drool
    in my mind's eye I see him as he deftly flings
    paint onto his palette and sits on his stool

    then strokes with his brush the quivering canvas
    that sits on his easel looking white as a sheet
    the virginal space that he seeks to encompass
    with stories in colour to give us a treat

    a vastness of detail that seeks out our eyes
    and through them it knaws at our questioning brains
    to make us all think of impossible skies
    as long legged elephants race on the plains

    of time as it watches us through it's soft dial
    that slowly melts over the branch of a tree
    or bends to creep down the side of a box
    that denotes the precipitous edge of the sea

    such art is too novel for us to take in
    it frightens and worries us how it can be
    that one man can think these things into existence
    and capture the thoughts for us all to see

    for art is an inate skill some geniuses have
    Dali and Da Vinci are only just two
    of those blessed with memory like a photograph
    and the skill to repeat an image so true

    Da Vinci could plan and paint true to his vision
    Dali in modern days almost the same
    to be able to dream the impossible with passion
    is so unusual as to garner great fame

    but now my poem has come to an end
    so what shall I write to finish it off
    I know, I'll simply cop out and send
    my words to you wrapped in an old table cloth

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    Stop beating yourself up. Looks are not everything. xxx
    Personality shines above all.
     

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