Rhymes or Reason

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  1. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    I thought we entertained each other here?
     
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  2. Awakening

    The light peaks through
    a day anew
    She lays asleep
    I untangle the sheets
    Her perfect love
    As soft as a dove
    Has proved me again
    A man I am.

    Coffee now
     
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  3. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    The Lone Cowboy

    Walked into a bar south of Houston

    quiet place ; old tunes on the box

    as I came to the bar, saw her starboard afar

    head sunk to her chest ; hat all ajar



    Must have been summat that drew me

    usually stirred clear of this type

    long golden curls and a stetson half twirled

    so I sat seat apart ; heard muffled laugh



    So I beckoned the barman to fill me

    bourbon on ice long tall glass

    I nodded to fill up the ladies

    he nodded ok then he laughed

    to be contd!!
     
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  4. Candy Gal

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    Author: Anonymous

    In this world full of hurt and pain,
    I need someone who would help me through the rain.
    To comfort me when I'm sad,
    Doing everything just to make me glad.
    In this world, I need a Brave Knight,
    Who would never give up any fight?
    A knight who would dry away my tears,
    Telling me to overcome my fears.
    A knight who loves me for who I am inside,
    With him, there’s nothing more I need to hide.
    A person who will still be standing strong,
    Even though everything has gone wrong.
    I need someone who is willing to give me more,
    Someone I can call my Knight In Shining Armor.
     
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  5. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    v.good anonymouse!!
     
  6. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    the lone cowboy contd?

    He knew how to stay outa trouble

    and moved away cleanin the bar

    then I asked “ drink me with Ma’am

    she murmured ‘yea back again Sam?

    I whispered ‘no I’m just desperate dan”!



    She laughed as she turned to review me

    looked me up then across then right down

    then asked “ to whom do I owe the pleasure

    I said “well Ma’am I’m just an easy come listener

    taught by my grandpappie from down in Cheyenne”



    I said let’s sit in the corner in the sunlight

    then ya can see me for sure

    I don’t come with no side but carry some pride

    and can listen for hours that’s how I am



    She slid off the stool and I caught her

    I expected a stiffened response

    but she sunk into me low, and I walked her real slow

    ‘till we sat in sunlight aglow



    She told me a tale long and elaborate

    of first romances of course many times

    of tough cowhand abuse that started obtuse

    and finished up bruised and unkind



    she’d lost touch with her kids over eons

    Xmas cards that had faded not sent

    And now she just struggled alone in the gloom

    from the homestead; the bar then back home



    I thought to myself can’t do much

    but now started felt compelled to ascend

    from the floor of her hell to at least standin

    So brewed coffee and hit the deep well!



    I won’t bore you with all the years details

    they are well trodden pathways for some?

    But by the end of the first week we’d vowed abstinence

    and were cooking and laughing and meek!

    to really be contd again?

    fitz
     
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  7. Candy Gal

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    You are on a flow xxx
     
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  9. BJintheUK

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    Old man take your time to look in the mirror
    the longer you look your life becomes clearer
    you've done all you can to enjoy as time ran
    the moments you snatched from the ether

    for as much as it's said that time is a healer
    when left to its own it also can kill
    it depends on the circumstance
    planned out or left to chance
    if you'll become a believer

    does time reflect back from the glass on the wall
    does it force it to crack or leave no trace at all
    when our glance can be fleeting and time has no meaning
    the mirror becomes a deceiver

    yes it lies through its teeth when we smile at the glass
    for we see in reverse and what lies beneath
    the veneer of our lives as we struggle and strive
    till it cuts us through like a sharp cleaver

    so don't put your faith in what you see there
    the lopsided smile, the recalcitrant hair
    for we will all see you the other way round
    as you live through your life and your memories abound

    until at the last you become an old man
    who has time on his hands, and who at last can
    with a nod and a wink, raise a glass now to drink
    to the face in the mirror, the dreamer

    -----------------------------------------------------------------------

    Moonday tomorrow. Enjoy! :)
     
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  10. Candy Gal

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    I will be away for a few days. X
     
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  11. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    Nice one BJ very reflective and challenging!
     
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  12. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    I said Ma’am I gotta keep movin

    can’t stay in one place for too long

    how ya feelin right now? Are ya cruisin?

    She asked “Dan are ya askin me out”?



    I paused for a moment to consider

    what the lady was pannin about?

    I sure had become one mean travellin loner

    just used to own company and horse ‘grout’



    but there was something in her voice that unhinged me

    was more than a simple question for sure

    so I turned said I can stay little longer

    held her close as I kicked shut the door

    © fitz 2022
     
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    I'm the Queen of Underground,
    beefing with me, Stay in your lane when I'm around.
    Erica is the name,
    I came to rip the rap game//
    I heat it up like fire,
    The day I die I want Jesus to take me Higher//
     
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  14. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    A never never day

    I sat in frangipani glade
    the dogs stretched out in midday haze
    the seaward breeze moved gentle leaves
    this never never land can freeze!

    the early morns now cool and sharp
    Gone is that humid apple tart
    but still the sun creeps up the sky
    and by midday has drooped the eye

    just sit it out till twilight comes
    and off shore breezes hum their tunes
    the never never freeze at night
    need canvas swag till bleak sunlight

    the welcome tinge of daylight dawns
    as dew hangs heavy, still not warm
    the 'billy' lets off steam not dew
    and soon cold hands have thawed anew

    fitz © 2022
     
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  15. Candy Gal

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    I have been away.
    Now back xxx
     
  16. fitzgarabaldi

    fitzgarabaldi jolly swagman

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    what;s wrong with your back?
     
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  17. Candy Gal

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    Oiy get festive.
    It is the first of December
     
  18. Uhardrodnme

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    How it shakes me to the core,
    ignitng in an instant
    my pseudo woman-fire,
    To discover by the way
    his knowing eyes hold mine
    that I've become the object
    Of another man's sex-desire!
     
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  19. Candy Gal

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    Exotic is good
     
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    His approach is polished perfection --
    oh god, he's coming for me!
    yes come and get me --
    I'll give you all that's mine;
    The confidence in his stride
    takes my breath completely away,
    and sends quaking shivers
    racing up and down my spine!
     

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