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    Big grins from me....
     
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    ~ Breathing the fresh air~ reminds me why our parents told us to go outside and get some. Never too old to play.

    ~Sylvianna's poem was so terrific~! Apple didn't fall too far from the tree I guess. If she's this good now... sheesh~! lol
     
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    I thought this poem was perfect in every respect until I hit the last stanza, it was so heavy and full, it was just too hard to swallow. :& And -enthusiastic- sounds akward there..too bulky.
     
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    :) Appearantly the apple doesnt fall far from the tree...she writes very well for her age!

    Of course,her content is a lot more mild than some of your tantric fornication inuendo....but....you both write incredibly well!

    love and light
     
    Crayon, Oct 6, 2004
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    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I love that stanza, it's so true...
    This one felt like the approaching autumn evolving into moral harmonic tones leaving the same breathtaking effect as a forest of colored leaves.

    Sylph, sings to surf; again has that autumn tone to it... but maybe it's just me correlating everything to the chill air outside...

    I have a certain fondness for the word sashay... my favorite poet used that word alot to characterize a particular girl he liked; and you also use it well :)

    Wonderful works, sylvan! As always, thanks for sharing...
     
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    rather shitty rather shitty rather shitty... just critique.
     
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    I love your awesome descriptiveness and understanding of all things overall. Reminds me of the total opposite of "Jailmate"...
     
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