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  1. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    sylvan, this so makes me want to return back to that joyous yesterday, kick back, and relax! Wonderful job you've done here to capture that laid back luxury. I was also fond of this image here....

    so familiar... :)
     
    fulmah, Sep 7, 2004
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  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Wind scattered words
     
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  7. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    sylvan, this was so.... tantric! great erotic images coupled within a meditative atmosphere.... wonderful wonderful stuff :) I salute you my friend, for stanza's such as this...

     
    fulmah, Sep 8, 2004
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    Devices enticing the swirling congealing unveiling of a feeling and there is knowledge herein, from the emissions of a void into the illusion of celluloid, no one dares to avoid staring down their paranoid delusions- but who comes out alive!? Who comes out alive?! WHO COMES OUT ALIVE?!?

    For every one's sake, I hope that No One does.

    Much Love :)
     
    osiris, Sep 8, 2004
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  11. sylvanlightning

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    It went from a hinted hedonism -puffy clouds- -loose-fitting garments-, -yumminess- to a more peaceful and appreciative tones. -simplicity- -feel so fickle- appreciation of simple pleasures in life.
    I truly enjoyed this, it made me feel relaxed as I imagined and felt the imagery.
     
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  15. sylvanlightning

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    Doing well, exercising my intuition and sharpening my writing utensils. Feels good.

     
    KittenX, Sep 11, 2004
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    Very well crafted poem! Loved its final message.
     
    KittenX, Sep 12, 2004
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    Sometimes sharing life is all we need in order to express our innermost - opening line was fantastic...!
     
    littleskinny, Sep 13, 2004
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    Wow...

    "I want to know if you will risk looking life a fool for love,
    for your dream, for the adventure of being alive."

    :( I constantly call myself a fool in love.

    "I want to know if you can be alone with yourself and if you truly like
    the company you keep in the empty moments."

    Hmmmmm yes...but company of others keeps me sane.

    And I'll have to think and remember this one...

    "I want to know if you have touched the center of your own sorrow,
    if you have been opened by life's betrayals
    or have become shriveled and closed from fear of further pain."
     
    KittenX, Sep 17, 2004
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  39. KittenX

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    Speechless...indeed. I wish I could write with such grace and beauty. *sighs*
     
    KittenX, Sep 19, 2004
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