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tabula rasa

 

tabula rasa

 

tabula rasa

 

the opening was my favorite part, but the whole thing was excellent. The rhythm throughout is fantastic, you've done a fantastic job here getting syllables to bounce off each other in wierd places.... it's almost distracting, actually, it is distracting but I think that works in the poems favor! The conflict of simple complexity; reduction, expansion, the breaking of definitions, so wonderful!

 

and yet we find that regardless of the manner in which we choose to bear the beloved burden of eternity, it will be born. And yet(and yet, and yet--->like a certain fabled spear in the side of a certain noble sufferer), all the more reason is this to choose the proper manner by which to achieve this Work.

eMBeMLaHV!

 

tabula rasa

 

Let us speak with fragile truths,
freshly wrought ,
from silence to whisper.

Bypass the mind,
like a glass of wine,
with intoxicating warmth.

The meaning of this moment,
is the experience;
your eyes hold new feelings.

Where have you been...
It seems like forever
since your lips parted.

Embrace me,
with just your smile,
then I will understand.

 

Wind scattered words...so many.

 

yes, quite a few and many tabula rasas...

 

all I got when I opened it was a bunch of "wind scatttered words" didn't see the poetry. Thought I'd comment on those three words anyway.

 

Wonderful words, had to quote the entire piece as it speaks to me. I can relate this to myself to easily, it's almost too close for comfort.
-Where have you been- indeed...

 

Wind blown words ~*