Quatrain coroner

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by stalk, Sep 8, 2008.

  1. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    Headlights through the chilly fog, just around the bend
    Multiplying Magic Beat Replicate, radically fractal zen
    a bumpy road, a weeping willow through the window
    My head space buzz
     
  2. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    plummeting,
    I was picked up...no Idea
    where to- I asked,
    but no one heard me.
     
  3. neodude1212

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    A rubber twist wraps my wrist
    Such a perfect fit
    She left it for me, out of bliss
    God, I'll always miss
    Her Scent.



    (sorry stalk, 5 lines, but I had to)
     
  4. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    funny little polka dot hat
    it covered her eyes
    was always wearing it
    yet she never cried.
     
  5. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    Always hooded
    brooding through
    veins, I'm a city cell
    deleted
     
  6. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    Never, ever
    be sorry
    four poetry,
    even if it hurts.
     
  7. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    riding
    on the wings
    of
    imagination
     
  8. stalk

    stalk Banned

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    soaring
    on the sings
    of new gills...
    sprouting Routes...
     
  9. mariecstasy

    mariecstasy Enchanted

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    riding
    through the sky
    only to plummet
    to the sea
     
  10. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    L
    O
    L
     
  11. Ocean Bionic

    Ocean Bionic Hero of the People

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    Duh Pope,
    Trickle Dick,
    A Whisper left by opaque narwhal...
    stunning jasper.
     
  12. stinkfoot

    stinkfoot truth

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    Magic fish
    Soaring underwater
    Finally plummets
    To the sky
     
  13. stalk

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    le foot, almost sounds like
    her "Desired Constellation"
    little ones,
    I am why
     
  14. Ocean Bionic

    Ocean Bionic Hero of the People

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    blissful people,
    walking down the street.
    shaking hands as they greet.
    just to say "Hello!"
     
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    And not just that, you can't stop there!
    Them top hats dance! And Dontcha dare
    look at the sun, eat lots of carrots
    and have some fun! YEAH!
     
  16. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    A little boy
    Shops at distant gas stations
    and random restaurants
    Along the long highway
     
  17. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    guru
    where
    are
    you?
     
  18. Ocean Bionic

    Ocean Bionic Hero of the People

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    i'm the biggest tree
    in the forest,
    but one day
    I will fall.

    i'm the biggest tree
    in the forest,
    my death will feed
    the earth for more.
     
  19. neodude1212

    neodude1212 Senior Member

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    creativity
    what a waste
    a pointless world in which
    to speak with divine grace
     
  20. Ocean Bionic

    Ocean Bionic Hero of the People

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    ms. metaphor,
    you leave me with such guilt.
    sadly madam, i'm a bore.
    but I love you. A red or pink quilt.
     

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