Major P's Poems

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Major Peacenik, May 23, 2005.

  1. Major Peacenik

    Major Peacenik Member

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    Liberation

    Helpless
    in dependence underground
    streams cry joyously
    of freedom,
    Falling further into the earth.

    How we wandered
    reached stifled
    dreams
    (the finish line...
    we hardly dared
    to hope -)

    Our immortal, molten
    masters
    glow down
    here. We rush
    to meet them.
     
  2. Major Peacenik

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    Paper Crown

    he wore a crown of paper,
    not of proper laurel leaf --
    for he was no King
    no conquering hero, he,
    but a man of whiteboards and calculations.

    he was not old,
    but his head bore a question mark,
    soft and pale.
    the children loved him for his strength.
    some girls dreamed,
    but would never admit

    that it broke their hearts
    to watch him smile
    and wear a paper crown
     
  3. Major Peacenik

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    Hello! I have not been here for a long time. But now I am back. ^_^

    Ohio Swamp

    I smell the Ohio swamp in this shower.
    Shampoos grows in hotel bathrooms like local flowers -
    here they are clover white, in Wilkes-Barre they're soft lilac,
    in Hubbard a daisy blue.
    They sprout up in baskets to be picked, and at night
    I ease my way under the hot foreign bulb-lit rain
    to get soft again after a day of blacktop, white-line,
    swerve in shards of glass jetset from the grey mass above me,
    and I stand there breathing and getting soft under the hard water,
    and I bathe in nectar.

    In the steam of the night I cool at the window
    and hear the bullfrogs shuffle in their pond across the street -
    an hour ago, I saw the giant red sun
    set over wet housing developments near the highway.
    I breathe in coal, and rubber, and the trees,
    and ignition, and the hood cooling in the parking lot,

    and a boy knocks at the screen door in my mind
    to smile with me, and to tell me who I'd miss
    if I left and stayed away and never went back.
     
  4. Major Peacenik

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    Una

    so much spent an been
    few unfound
    unfurled, unbound
    so much said an seen an done
    how fixed the crowd
    an listless one
     
  5. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    both of your latest were wonderful... especially -ohio swamp- such wonderful imagery. took me away for few! enjoyed mucho :)
     
  6. KittenX

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    I liked Paper Crown a lot! Such a gem.
     
  7. Major Peacenik

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    Climbing the Stairs with Laundry

    How clean,
    the white shirt laundered
    after breakfast,

    after sitting awhile,
    after reading the paper;
    How airy

    is its light, its weight
    it's here,
    nesting on my arm

    As I climb
    the stairs,
    New against my skin,

    breathing morning,
    awake,
    Unstarched,

    Unfolded.
     
  8. KittenX

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    Climbing the stairs made me smile, thanks! Airy indeed. Lovely.
     
  9. Major Peacenik

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    A Near Time

    He is married,
    a father of three,
    a strong-jawed modern Man
    with a mind to do right
    by all involved.

    In the spirit of things,
    I do not suffer;
    when he is gone,
    I can say I never really believed.
    But when he is near,

    I do my best
    to intrigue -

    And now you tell me
    he said he is worried
    about me
    that he thinks I don't
    get enough sleep
    that he wishes
    I'd take it easy;

    and everything I see
    is tinged
    with a heartbeat.
     
  10. dragonangelbiker

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    i love your way with words.good job
     
  11. Major Peacenik

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    Song of the Red Desert

    so much spent an been
    few unfound
    unfurled, unbound
    so much said an seen an done
    how fixed the crowd
    an listless one


    As I proceeded on my way
    across the windy desert day,
    the sweeping cinder of the sky
    enlisted me to have a try

    in leaving sounds and sands behind.
    In haste I moved, upset, unkind,
    unbending in my will to please
    these new and swirling entities.

    Then to my face my daughter cried,
    "Oh, Papa, do not leave us -
    the strafing winds will seize us -"

    I looked upon her face and smiled.
    Said, to my only living child,
    "Forgive me, please, I cannot stay;
    the desert winds will have their way,

    and I am but a glove to time."
    I turned from her, began to climb
    the dune that sheltered tents and pans,
    and camels tethered to the sands,

    where I had lived for twenty years.
    And lest the dry winds see me,
    I let no moisture leave me.

    Now shifting to the present tense,
    I tell this story, ages hence,
    far from that flight of sound and form,
    where all my sighs will do no harm,

    and I am well removed from me
    as I existed in that sea
    of shifting gloss, of sun-bleached wind.
    But know that time has got me pinned:

    I never reached the shifting line
    that heaven urged me on to find.
    I cannot go back to my friends
    or family to make amends,

    for when I saw I was misled,
    by then too far I'd drifted-
    and all the dunes were shifted -

    Though skies excised me from the sand,
    I never reached the promised land;
    though cut I am from earth and soil,
    still in the desert I must toil.

    so much spent an been
    few unfound
    unfurled, unbound
    so much saved an sought an won
    how long the light
    an red the sun
     
  12. Major Peacenik

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    Bomb

    Serendipitously, I find
    the Bomb.

    My word, but it is cold
    Crystalline
    An insect of jeweled eyes
    and plastic wings,

    black, and attached
    to the bottom of the driver's seat.
    I have found the Bomb

    in my car. Here.
    I start
    and stop, my eyes

    pinned
    to the glint of yellow
    Light reflected
    on its thorax.
     
  13. imherbert

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    Bomb...frightening. I dig all of your words. They are so many, your words. And I begin to wonder maybe I'm borrowing your words, because you own them so well.

    May energy's unseen find you and guide your night, into luminous light.
     
  14. Major Peacenik

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    Sake

    Beckon the brick men
    who've broken the pattern
    of wobegone wilderness,
    wicker and cloth.
    Wreckin' and trickin'
    will crack a neutrality;
    staunch surreality
    flits like a moth.

    Truckin' and struttin'
    along in the nothing -
    a merry old time,
    for a fox or a hare.
    Sittin' and seconds
    are free for the taking
    but freedom will flouder
    for sake of the flail.

    A midweight competitor
    swore in the hall:
    "A cancer on reticence,
    Pox on it all!"
     
  15. saffronfrancisburnet

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    hi there
    this is the best you have posted i feel
    it engulfs the person with such
    a reality in which the human
    becomes accustomed to live...
    and needing to be free from it all...
    lovely piece lovenpeace from saff.
     
  16. Major Peacenik

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    To My Intelligent Friend

    It's not so much the spark in your eye
    as the twist in your lip
    when you smile and know
    what to say, and how to say it -

    How you flash, a leopard
    of cyclones and silence broken,
    that first shout
    in a hall of echoes - Visible,
    bright, and made more wise
    as you realize your elequence
    is not for good.

    I should kiss you if I would,
    were we four eyes and not forty -
    but oh! - How I am proud
    that as many ears have heard,
    reckoned, learned.
    I smile, for I must wait.
    I anticipate, and I know
    that four eyes in the dark
    will say more than two mouths
    ever could.


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    "I anticipate, and I know
    that four eyes in the dark
    will say more than two mouths
    ever could."

    That part was my favorite. Very awesome, and true.
     
  18. Major Peacenik

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    Lull

    It's the quiet of the ocean,
    in between waves -

    When the moon,
    in stripes, barely ripples;
    when shells' roaring yields
    to that blanket calm
    of woven sand, and a sky so close
    that blinking leaves a visible trail.

    It's then they fade, the rushing
    and breathing, stewing
    and seething elements.
    In one voice they sink into the sand,
    the inhalation before a verse.

    Such a Still on this water,
    gathering for another expression
    of Might -
    should -
    Will -
    Until the buildup is irresistable,
    and a crest breaks - crashes
    in on itself,
    and sound -

    Sharp water;
    beneath, rocks clack
    in protest and resettle.
     
  19. Anastaulia

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    Very talented. It's easy to see you observe everything around you and take it in so well. I'm envious of your ability to transform these images into such beautiful words.
     
  20. Major Peacenik

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    Haha, you all are being so nice... thanks very much, you are quite generous... but could you please offer some constructive crit? Don't hold back, I'm here to improve ^_^.
     

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