Lyrical Vat

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by fulmah, Feb 11, 2005.

  1. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Awwwwwwwwww fulmah, -some things are oxygen- just makes me wanna give you a hug and find ya a nice, decent girl to snuggle up with!! That one is just -right- in length and the expression of sentiments.
     
  2. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    thanks! I wrote that a few months ago and forgot about it, then found it yesterday and it inspired some guitar, so perhaps we'll actually record it tonight, or at least soon... should be good :)
     
  3. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    Breathtaking and familiar as if written under the same sky with a mutual light sparking in the observers eye.


    Really a quite beautiful collection. Lush and vibrant. My favorite two pieces both contained the word 'eyes' in the title. 'Coward Eyes' evoked an interesting blend of Kali and Lolita for me.

    Bright Blessings ~*
    Nice to feel your presence again.
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    your grandiflora leaf floret--
    organize these
    and live without reason
    in hallways driveways sidestreets
    in alleys in stations in bars
    in the cutflower shadowy evening

    flood the shortcuts
    into radiant sweeping reality
    at the apex of uncomfortable routine
    drag the dust pumping white noise...

    I'm not above it, but
    I'm going home:

    it's about time to turn off
    to masquerade your patient eyes
    and live without reason
    with your grandiflora leaf floret


    ***if you want to hear it.... http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=10527
     
  5. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    no nocturnal party will take the escalator home
    we've blown the grid.... yes we did
    so let's explore the backrooms for the unknown
    because questions are natural
    and usually a test...
    I won't give specifics too prolific


    mysteries essential to the progress of honest conquest
    and as your lungs intake ion breeze,
    fascination rises by degrees,
    so we're leaving
    this evening


    promise me our destiny awaits
    before I come down
    the magic lingers longer in the inner eye
    and it's easier to get out of town

    the county lines contain a black hole
    depart to rebound
    high culture comes for clean water and air
    plants families to drown


    http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=12480
     

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