Kitten's Litter

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  1. KittenX

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    Rhinoceros stampeded
    In my general direction.
    Showed no signs of halting.
    The steering was jammed,
    And his brakes did not function.
    Hooves flew with dust wings
    Wheeling, aiming between my eyes.

    I stood open and waiting,
    I stood blind facing the distance
    Between racing heart beat
    And the inevitable last breath.
     
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    My thoughts are mice,
    That scamper down the carpet,
    Then roll on the wooden planks.
    Cheese doesn’t delight their taste buds,
    No trap can capture,
    Snap their wiggling tails.
    As they burrow into their asylum,
    Delivering the vermin venom,
    Leaving me startled at the sight.
     
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    Let’s somersault into the lake,
    Our ankles bounded by weight.
    Let’s synchronize as we descend,
    And kiss, while we asphyxiate.


     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    I really enjoyed Morning (sulky) Thoughts... it was executed well, your imagery / story emphasize the thoughts themselves and create a wonderful little work. And your ending is exactly as it should be, ties it all together nicely. Thanks for boosting my spirits on this drudgy monday!
     
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    Cul-de-sac turned me,
    Begging for change and
    Starring at pretty strangers
    With blood shut ego.

    Astrology is not the answer.
    I have to revise the future.
    Shouting kitchen nightmares
    Still glare at the nape.

    I squirmed at the sight of blood.
    Whose?
    On my fingertips dipped
    In hot tomato sauce.

    Baffled at the sanctity
    Of underprivileged lives.
    The dinosaur boy tells tales
    But I don't listen
    I'm too deep in personal debt.
     
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    The balloon inflates,
    Reaching a climax.
    Pink latex tempts
    The needle, anesthetic kisses.
    Too late to plead or argue,
    Swift hand maneuver,
    Artistry of piercing,
    Without regret.

    Shriveled rubber shards
    Lay on the palms.
     
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    Customers pay their dues,
    To the hovering icon.
    The maudlin procession,
    Throws lucky pennies into the holy water.

    Pent up in stuffy submarine penthouse,
    I watch as seagulls mourn,
    And hope for an intermission to the show.
    I shake off lashes from sleeping moss,
    I’m bored.

    Still drama carries on.
    Drunk debauchery of harlequins.
    Bloated pockets of gold
    For the backstabbing impotents.
    Camouflage fashion during
    Ostrich beheading.
    I’m curious.

    Circus rages on.
    Simulation seeps into nostrils,
    Coats the eye.
    As a pregnant bride
    Jumps off the bridge.
    A bitter aftertaste of reality.
    A morning-after pill for the mind.
     
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    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    This stanza rocks, KX! Interesting imagery that builds up into that closing line... good job here...
     
  9. sylvanlightning

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    Morning (Sulky) Thoughts

    I love the whole piece. I went through a time where I sought out all the family pictures, with me in them, and burned them in a big brass bowl. "Everyone I begin to miss, manages to get away." I loved that esp... :(
     
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    A pitch fork,
    Fine tunes my larynx.
    I increase the decibels,
    But the sand mutes
    The sound waves.

    Lest by chance
    You should hear
    A muffled echo reach
    Your ear drum,
    Will you stir in your sleep,
    While the memory puzzle
    Will work itself out
    To build a portrait.

    Even if unconscious,
    Will you still
    Take heed and
    Respond to me?
     
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    Still alone. Luna above, layer after layer, her silvery presence bwixt shadow glows... gathering, pooling within this darkness, and unafraid of my secrets. Moths dusting this unquoted directness on a wooden chair in this house of sound without windows or doors. What is this pulsing tenderness?
     
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    Touching work. I can relate.
     
  13. fulmah

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    I really love the way stimuli unfolds.... starting with the single image, questioning resonance, ending with the philosophical. Well done. Really cool concept too; I always enjoyed trying to send telepathic messages into my girls dreams and asking her the next day if she remembered any of it. Sadly, it never worked. :)
     
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    Sharpened hopeful despair... but if the prey is willing is it still worth chasing? I could linger on what you have written, till jupiter turns retrograde again, if you so mote it be. Blessed be ~*
     
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    How about Unseen shore for #59?

    "I need a map of your landscape.
    With the heat of your breath,
    You tease my nerve endings
    And mutter nonsense."

    ...but it really doesn't matter when your invisible. Still I'll say its glorious, and mean it, if only to relish in this insomnia.
     
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    Thank you! I changed the title. :) And thanks for the comments on the Fatalist.
     
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    Your quite welcome,

    With these gilded passionate leaves how can anyone be left speechless.

    ~*
     
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    This is great.
     
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    Zealous zebras gallop
    To line up at the queue.

    Shoving, trotting through
    The hitchhiker meadow.

    Curious telescopes spy,
    Lemurs rally, rotate clockwise.
    Purple tongues trap sporadic flies.

    Bamboo antenna strapped,
    Catching frequencies
    Behind the metal bars.

    Whose keen eyes
    Will get a glimpse at
    the other side of the zoo?

    Safety in numbers,
    Behind concave minds,
    But who are these primates, blocking our view?
     
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    Bravo. Love it. All smiles here.
     

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