Is it as bad as i think?

ouch ramblingON...i dont want you to hurt yourself because of my poetry haha. why not put a pad on you desktop when you read some of mine next time?

 

at first i thought of that song "the roof is on fire" haha but you know i like that man. its simple...but deep. seems really simple though...like the meaning is evident. is there a deeper meaning? or was it simply to write?

 

lolz. it was not bad writing as my head is not too sore. It just was not very clever or surprising. but good writing I cant take away....but ask yourself this: do I want to be good or be remembered?

peace bro.

 

hmm...not sure haha...i wrote that after a girl who ment the world to me tore out my heart and honestly...i wasnt thinking when i wrote it. it was just my emotions on paper...bad memories

 

Sorry to hear that bro. But, thinking back on it, isn't it such a positive and powerful memory? Though, it was a rough time, it was a cornerstone point in your life and you will always feel and reflect on that moment she tore your heart out for the rest of your life. Pretty radical isn't it? You may of lost her but you still have a powerful source of inspiration because of that happening. For good or for bad you can draw from it and use it to create art. Sort of like drawing from a well, organically thought up and naturally applied, thus giving something of yourself at the expense of love. It's already paid for now finish it in a positive light.

If you ask me, these kinds of memories are priceless and I feel blessed that they occur. Without out such heart wrenching stints our lives would be dull and uninspiring.

Peace out friend. Write something by Monday and have it posted in a new thread so this community can enjoy a new source of inspiration. At the very, very least we can pick it apart...of course leaving your heart alone.

Oh and don't make me slam my head again. I don't want to do that.

 

anyone still here? wrote another peom..its kinda short and may make you hit your head on something but i wrote it when i was really high...then when i looked at it again the next day i thought it wasnt too bad so here;

when life gives you lemons
smoke a cigarett because it is suicide
when i imagen how life could have been with you i cry
what makes me happy makes you sick
what makes you happy kills my soul

 

i love it

 

thanx!
i have (in my opiniun) much better ones if you like to hear em

 

i would love to!

 

hey man that last poem was epic man that hit me good had a nice even flow man nice

 

lol, yo, this bull right here you know what I'm sayin?

 

its time to reopen this little thread to the guy who asked about my poem "The Roof" you asked if it had a deeper meaning to it or if i wrote it just to write. Well my answer to that is i was listening to the doors i cant really remember what song by the doors but some song inspired me to write it. For the deeper meaning no not really i think all of that is coincidental i mean i like how people are reading into my poems but sometimes there isnt meant to be any deeper meaning than what is wrote there