Do You Haiku?

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  1. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    A connection made
    A connection lost in the
    Depths of space and time
     
    Meliai, Dec 28, 2018
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    bft4evr Senior Member

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    I received a like
    from the lady I'll call D
    I'm so glad to see
    she's not mad at me
     
    bft4evr, Dec 28, 2018
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  5. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    A serene pathway
    Gentle breezes blowing through
    Where am I, again?
     
    Deidre, Dec 29, 2018
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  7. KL71

    KL71 Yanks since '81/Fins since '83 :)

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    Really hates the Pats
    Wildcard round to wear them out?
    Kay-Ell sure hopes so!

    :grinning:
     
    KL71, Dec 29, 2018
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  9. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Holiday ending
    It is somewhat bittersweet
    A new year unfolds...
     
    Deidre, Jan 1, 2019
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  11. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    Daisies are for keeps
    Nana's favorite flower
    Petals on the ground
     
    Deidre, Jan 3, 2019
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  13. YouFreeMe

    YouFreeMe Visitor

    You throw so much shade
    It's enough to keep me cool
    On a summer's day
     
    YouFreeMe, Jan 5, 2019
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  15. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    Haha this is pretty great
    Throwing a little shade yourself there with your haiku
     
    Meliai, Jan 5, 2019
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  17. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    And the rain fell hard
    The sound woke me from a dream
    I lay here, smiling
     
    Deidre, Jan 24, 2019
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  19. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    I have been bitten
    A little bug named smitten
    She looks so timeless
     
    Pete's Draggin', Jan 26, 2019
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  21. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    Grey just like the sky
    Winter clouds as heavy
    As the grey stone inside me
     
    Meliai, Jan 27, 2019
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    Irminsul Valkyrie

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    The chariot rumbles
    Over thunderous skies
    Lit by cracks of lightening
    From anvil toned delivery.

    [​IMG]
     
    Irminsul, Jan 27, 2019
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  25. Pete's Draggin'

    Pete's Draggin' Visitor

    I can't sleep at all
    Thinking of that silver fox
    Truly a beauty
     
    Pete's Draggin', Jan 27, 2019
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  27. Meliai

    Meliai Banned

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    Damn
    Middle line has 6 syllables. Fail
     
    Meliai, Jan 28, 2019
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  29. Deidre

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    The day is coming
    Candy boxes and flowers
    Oh, Saint Valentine
     
    Deidre, Jan 30, 2019
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  31. Irminsul

    Irminsul Valkyrie

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    I wasn't aware there were syllable rules, i was just going with the flow.
     
    Irminsul, Feb 2, 2019
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  33. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    He loves me, he loves
    me not, he loves me, he loves
    me not. He loves me!!
     
    Deidre, Feb 2, 2019
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    They go: 5, 7, 5
    But in this thread it seems there is a relaxed approach towards little non-conforming poems.. They're fine : )
     
    Driftrue, Feb 2, 2019
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  37. Irminsul

    Irminsul Valkyrie

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    Oh ok. Well this is Haiku 2.0 then haha.
     
    Irminsul, Feb 2, 2019
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  39. Deidre

    Deidre Follow thy heart

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    No haiku dogma in 'dis here thread. :kissingheart:
     
    Deidre, Feb 2, 2019
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