change one word...the way harder edition

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; no emotions fell in place, except at occasional lovemaking, when she was hit by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine lies), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the bright silhouette of the stranger that shone through the window.

 

changing a word sometimes requires a change of the conjunctive...thats fine...also..occurred to me that this sentence may become several..also ok to change the punctuation where needed



She murdered her dark and devious inventor; no emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was hit by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine lies), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the bright silhouette of the stranger that shone through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was hit by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine lies), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the bright silhouette of the stranger that shone through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was hit by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the bright silhouette of the stranger that shone through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was hit by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the bright silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was hit by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which swept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious inventor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious suitor; vile emotions fell in place, except during occasional lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

She murdered her dark and devious suitor; vile emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; vile emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in postmortem that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; vile emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the window.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the donut.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stranger that looked through the telescope.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), rotting beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stalker that looked through the telescope.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was kissed by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), pausing beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stalker that looked through the telescope.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in place, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was visited by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), pausing beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stalker that looked through the telescope.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in pieces, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was visited by a violent howl of wind which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), pausing beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stalker that looked through the telescope.

 

He murdered her dark and devious suitor; his emotions fell in pieces, except during passionate lovemaking, when she was visited by a violent howl of regret which crept up the bodies (for it is in Elsinore that our heroine resides), pausing beside the gravestones, and calmly displacing the dim silhouette of the stalker that looked through the telescope.