We can also submit out poetry in the SESAME STREET or MOTLEY CRUE forums, but you don't see us all crawling over there! Keep your insinuous...
bono sings very well, very earnestly, and very consistantly. for this, I am willing to overlook his ego.
ooooh she's so lucky
The first stanza really got me, but it seems the last stanza is a little unnecessary...
ooh I was thinking of two individuals, but its also way cool to think about society as a whole!
QUESTIONS: 1. Can we ever decide to link our individualities, and move forward together from that point to increase our understanding of the world...
oooh nice parallel
I am sink gunk; I am old guitars and pull-out couches I am a pledge drive on public television Look at what I've done-- I am what I've become....
Son of a Multiverse In samples he passed he had seen his place (Adjusted the mirror and spat in its face) The beetles who carried him knew his...
Shampoo! You are concise and clear. You lay it out and don't distort it. Good job!
if I write a crappy poem i translate it into french and it still sounds great
Deep
He says weren't we once flying or were we just getting high holy fuck dude awesome... the first two stanzas and even the third are concrete, rock...
Not very shocking. Reads more like an excercise than an inspired work. "Forever ignoring his life" could definitely be disputed. Sounds more...
BEST EVER good ALL THE WAY DOWN congratulations
Ooooh, Mike. Wait it out, things will get better. First stanza is very powerful, especially the "shady cell / vertical bar motif".
I like this, but I lost interest near the end. "French inhale" is a powerful phrase, but maybe you should use it more sparingly, because by the...
theres a little line between angsty and scary, and you're right next to it
for a first, pretty good form standard content but executed fairly well my favorite part: Your hands are warm, Though they will never embrace...
I'm gettin an iBook! Perfect for photoshop and final cut :)
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