Nice.
Yeah, I know-wishful thinking...
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This is a really great poem, superb imagery! I especially love the alliteration of the first line.
You're funny. I thought you were writing about a girl too, either way it's great.
I understand your point, however, this is reality-this does happen. I just want people to be aware of the pain and suffering that these factory...
This is really good as is, I enjoyed it very much.
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They come his way, He turns his head, But knows his fate, He'll soon be dead. They pull. They tug, He begins to cower, As his eyes find love,...
I really liked this, I could actually feel the day.
This is beautiful. I can relate.
Thanks a lot!
So Good! I love it.
Interesting...If it were a little longer, it'd make a good song! I like it.
I sit. I ponder the past, Willing it to pull me back. I stand. My head begins to spin, And so the day begins. Where am I? How did I get here,...
Wow, very nice...Very nice indeed!
Thanks, all-I appreciate it!
"I was a postcard, I was a record, I was a camera..until I went blind. And now I'm riding all over this island, looking for something to open my...
I'm cleaning my cat's shit- Out of the litter box, I'm pretending it's you. The Hard, Brown. Clumps of excrement, I'm throwing in the trash.
The sun is crying. Dripping fire- Melting time. Creating puddles of life around us. We all jump in, Burn our skin, But start to swim.......
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