I like your poem Old Hippy, the words are so true
I really, really liked your poem
I really enjoyed your writing, well written and funny
I really liked the 4th one, keep em coming
while reading your poem the words formed a perfect picture in my head, thats so cool, for lack of a better word
Thankyopu ever so much Miss Beatle!
thanks man
wow, it makes me so happy that someone is reading my thoughts and giving me advice and feedback, thankyou guys so much
"cold was the bloom of what was always believed tempered..." I love this one!! It is sad but uplifting at the same time.
Thankyou guys for taking the time to write your opinions. It means alot that someome is just listening. Thanks!!!!
I feel the words in my mouth building up and uncomfortable gritty like chewing on sand that won't wash out. The connection is lost from my brain...
I feel like this alot and get oh so tired of it.
A stranger walked pass by me today, a look of recognition in his eyes. I passed by unaware and aloof. When he called out my name, I instantly knew...
I love the way you wrote this, your words flow
Thankyou, and I will keep my eyes on the stars I must create a system or be enslaved by another mans. I will not reason or compare, my...
How can I explain I'm lonely when thousands of others have said it? Maybe I'll just sit here and be silent respectful in thought for those lonely...
one who will not beg just pass me the joint okay I want to be high
Such dreams I have, big dreams made up of little pieces. Pieces of smiles, touches, music, tears, the smell after it rains, my daughters greeting...
Exactly right on!!!
very sexual but also sweet, i liked it alot
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