If I were a superhero my name would be Fast Talking Dame, I would render enemies helpless with convincing arguments and minimal bloodshed....
Thanks guys, and once again my apologies for the vocabulary...I'm not trying to patronize anyone.
Wow. I'm amazed this one got dredged up...cool
Interesting. Somehow I thought that stanza was essential. The whole poem is about going up on the mountain in the dark and sitting on a huge rock,...
I understand the confusion now that you pointed it out. I thought that since there was no punctuation there one would just carry on reading to the...
It's a good song.:)
*smiles* Once again, a truly beautiful piece. This is the only part that seems a little choppy. You may have intended that, not sure. The rest of...
A song bird leaves one trill in the darkness... My melody. I leave the warmth of night and dream to wander in the mountain dawn. Climbing the...
I really like your perspective on this. First of all you are definetly right about the cliched star dust. I'll do something about that....
The moon measures lost noons with shadows and occult chants flecked with sprinkled stardust; the gravity of tides pulled to the nadir. Her zenith...
I love it!
This is a beautiful piece. The ending really pulls it all together. Bravo!
I love this one. It's beautiful. Why is it that lions and moonlight/candles always seem to raise such profound imagery? I've used them in the past...
At 5am her eyes are still heavy. It rings again and she sighs with resignation. Picks up. "Emergency services, how can I help you?" Her brow...
I'm sure you've all heard the little story. "It was a dark and stormy night. Three pirates sat around a campfire. 'Smee,' said the captain, 'tell...
Hmmm. A very beautifully written piece. It is intriguing and perplexing, yet never loses the readers attention.
Treacherous slaves to the common day of quite contemplation,...
Thanks everyone. It seems like I lose myself to the writing and ghosts are whispering lines in my ears. Sometimes I wish I could think more...
Thanks for your encouragment. Look forward to seeing some of your new works up here.
"El rio sigue trayendo agua consigo y con ella limpio mi rostro torcido Y endereso camino para seguir Con mi brazo dormido Me abro camino atravez...
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