Nice piece here dude.
First petals of snow-- dogwood blossoms flickering softly to the ground.
A beautiful vision eloquently relayed.:)
"If looking in weren't a sin, I'd bring windex to kiss the glass." What a great ending!
Simplicity in infinity is chaos. I take small bites, but forever amplified the image mocks the rational.
I thought you would like that one. ;)
Wow man. I hope I never make you mad...Awesome images in there though. And I just love that name! Peace
A grove of bamboo,silent in the sodden hours, languidly stretches and yawns, arms to the warm sun, leaves chattering to thrush, a nest-maker in...
I really liked the natural thought of this poem. It is packed with wonderful ideas.:)
Thank you both. I hadn't even noticed that line before, but you are definitely right!
Mirror mocking concave convexities, the perplexity of intuiton rattled veins softer stains on skin bruised from within the mind. How to find the...
I love the distinct style you have been developing. :)
These lines are straight, cut into the fabric of time, the moss of the liquidated mind-- measured and steely faced. But thought, irrational in...
Both "Forgotten Ground" and "Obvious Answer" were terrific!
*sigh* As always, beautiful, intuitive, innovative,extraordinary.
"I've turned the edges to curves I've decorated my roof with stars" I like your style alot. Look forward to reading more.:)
Fall into that fourth dimension looking glass tumble beyond the mirror of reality: is infinity your reflection? Frame and change, at a slow...
Of all the thirst in sandy mouths dunes of sifting and sifting grain the sun as a fluent brother to the night leaves phosphorescent presperation--...
A beautiful nod to duality and conundrum.
"What is a human but water's way of running uphill?" I really like your ideas. This is a wonderful poem!
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