wonderful poem, full of concrete images. very solid, the flow is wonderful, word choice moves well in a whispy kind of way. i really enjoyed this...
very good poem with good line enjambments great job especially for someone of your age.
very truthful keep writing.
i really enjoyed reading this poem. the poem is full of concrete imagery and vivid word choice. the ommition of punctuation lends a rather...
poetry should evoke whatever the reader feels and decides, but since your asking as the author. It's a metaphor for a woman. but your...
purple and a reddish pink
i'm a maple, pretty good description
aries are passionate that is different from jealous. i'm an aries and it takes quite a bit to get me jealous, but if it goes that far its pretty...
Willow Violated Weeping willow bent in prayer shivering, shivering shaking in un-delighted invasion of limbs once its own. Never touched in...
very nice form and rythm. also there is a great source of internal rhyme here. which sets a nice flowing pace. great job. i also love the words...
very beautiful and concrete images. very sad in its beauty. great piece.
nice concrete imagery in places here. good poem.
black september is a really great line i love it. the rhyme schemem matches up in most point with the couplets. you could put your line breaks...
personally and that is the key here, i believe that nature and life weather from god or otherwise should be protected. i especially believe that...
i'll be at waka. i only live like under 30 min. away the line up is too good to miss. i can't wait for keller williams. tickets are high priced...
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