Really liked the poem, don't think I can do justice to it...let's see... Clean white boy Why is your shadow A frightening, faceless negro Who...
Very nice, Saff. Digs down into the soul of transformation and tries to make peace with the light at the center. Always enjoy reading your work!
Thanks, everyone, for all your kind responses! It felt kind of vulnerable to post this...kinda personal. Thanks for making me feel welcome again...
Nice work, Kim. Very eloquent and lovely, in your usual style.
You can blame the pen that wrote the lines that tore a lover's heart... that siezed my lady from my arms, that caught me naked, wasting breath,...
Good poem. It avoids some of the problems of most short poems, giving us some vivid images and unusual turns of phrases with little fluff. Very...
Hi Saff...long time no see... Your words speak to me...reminds me of how sometimes in a dream state all the layers can be stripped away, and...
Good work my friend! Some things we should never forget...
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