I like Rilke a lot, thanks for posting it.
Nicely fragmented, still flows although it changes up quite a bit. The images are vivid and bright. Very nice, thanks for posting it.
Well, this is nothing personal at all, but I'm not a poetry critic, and tend not to like poetry criticism of any detail. My comments were offered...
The streetlamps end and down that way there's not enough moonlight to see very well... I don't want to venture there at all but there is where my...
Good poem, but I thought it lost some momentum toward the end. Very complex language, holds the interest very well. Shows lots of creativity....
Avant-garde poetry is great, man. I used to write a lot of it, but I haven't in a long time. This poem is a good example of it, and it hangs...
A very curious poem. It kind of works on you, like some dreams do. If babies could talk, I wonder what they'd say?
Bringing stars, my lover the beautiful night floods the gates of dawn with moons and crickets' calls, chasing the sun around the watery world. I...
Nice work. Beautiful phrasing, lovely reflections. Enjoyed it!
I didn't think it was lame. I liked it a lot, and I thought it shows a lot of talent. Whenever a poem has a lot of passion in it, it gathers...
This is a very moving poem. It touched me. My parents are getting elderly, and I could really relate to the emotions it stirred up. Good work,...
A nice little poem...doesn't say a lot, maybe, but what it does say it says nicely. Good work, Kim. :)
I can tell these poems are from the heart...direct, emotional, really lets the reader feel your loss. Good work, thanks for posting them! :)
Hidden in her coat was a picture of a church with the dogwood in full bloom, and memories of swearing men every other night crowded her...
Just a few words that intermingle together nicely...beautiful work, my friend.
The poem has a real flow to it. Works very nicely. I like the chorus especially.
Eloquent words...they really draw the reader in and make them feel a part of the poem. I could really relate.
I creep into your dreams at night and bring the shrieks which you aver; slinking thus in dim starlight I bang on pots and cause a stir. There is a...
I just wanted to post to this to say I really enjoyed this piece. It reminds me of winter mornings long past, where one's breath becomes artwork...
Works very well...moves right along and has three distinct sections that all weave together nicely. Nice thoughts, makes one feel a nice glow...
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