hi there this is great, i feel as i read, it became a song in my mind dancing almost with feelings we learn to live with, lovenpeace from saff.
for all .. unlike the days,the creeping dawn,i hide from this. folded entwined not free, not free nor willing to be. whole.for our todays, grew...
to all... far the path of love, it changes twists ,entwines not knowing what its done. the trust does pass upon winds that shiver with respect....
hi there i love this poem..almost unnerving...almost wanting to touch that moment .. great picture from a distant . lovenpeace from saff
for all.. who weeps upon this earth, let ride the tides and waves we filter memories ,lock onto moments gone... shiver i do, i will and moan for...
tonight... deranged a look of loneliness, pale life.come again into my arms my bed... i miss thee,i want thee. is this it,time the way we drift....
just found this. an energy is written here . i love the fact that each part makes a picture in my mind of an ending happening a change in life...
part two ...if need be salt may drip from eye to tongue.taste be whole. dive deep,tis your right to live yes, live and feel. what transparent...
for all again who seek.. what it means to live and love.. now i am.. sickened to refill a vessel ,again. so tepid as the ocean, we enter all our...
hi there this is a great piece i like the explaining in words, of longing to understand..yourself or ones self. the human .. you are you ..what...
for all who live and more.... forget such times gone.an end we only fear.. as transparent under silver rays,i weep.drips from eye to tongue...
hi there good worded poem. i also disagree {are you fighting your inner fears that you are in fact not free really, to have to point your finger...
hi this is very lovely so calm yet i feel an urge to scream to let go and be free of a madness that this world creates....the loneliness but...
hi there yes very great words of passion for life here and for freedom.... yet america was never safe ,like the rest of the world reaction...
for all just something that came to me tonight.... such weathered days,upon our shores.not heated moments, why complain...for tranquil life...
hi i agree this is a lovely piece i love the colours of life... lovnpeace from saff keep writing this is a beautiful style.
yes this is great to read so powerful ,very true...for all really. { reminds me of cinnamon my oldest daughter, to see past what we are offered...
to all.. what wilderness is this, to drench me whole. waiste deep in sadness, bitter sorrows... tread not unto the shallow...
hi there great words ,i love the feeling of freedom within your work. lovenpeace from saff
for all. imprisioned,we are not free like lovers light drifting an ocean ,dripping in war i shift alter shelter no more. what transparent skin...
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