I like it. Keep up the good work.
dab, The haunting will stop and peace you will find, I promise. Time is the great healer. Good luck with the rest of your journy.
What a wonderful sentiment. I bet you made someone feel very special.
Thank you. This really did happen and I thought it was the end for me.
WOW So elloquent
I didn't get through it the first time I started reading it, but I am glad I went back to it. This runs the gambet of emothins. You go from happy...
Then you may consider it written for you. Happy birthday, Merry Christmas, happy Mother's day, Happy Valentines day, etc. I'm glad so many...
The kite Summer vacation but where is the sun It’s a raw cold day, what to do for fun Bad storm last night, way out to sea Now huge waves...
children of the world brighten parents lives daily without them, we're through
to help all in need feels like why I was put here hope I do it well
What a nice metaphore for life.
Well, after the complements I received here, I decided to let my girl read it, and she wept. That wasn't my goal, but she was touched.
This sounds like it was written to be a RAP song. Never read a poem about a gun before, Definatly different.
Very nice. (Are you from the Philippines?)
Curiosity is getting the better of you. So go to a public place, like a mall. Bring your cell phone, call him, and ask him what he is wearing....
I should probably mind my own business, but you should only attack the material, not the poster. If you want to degrade him, please do it...
You're welcome, my friend.
When you are trying to be two parents at the same time, And you don't think it will ever end. If you feel the need to drop a dime, Call me, and...
Tis wisdom I find lurking in these words of yours, Produce more for my tired eys, if you would, so that I might feel younger while reading them.
Great stuff, keep it coming.
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