Cute. This made me smile.
I Like….. Going for a walk in the rain with a lover Then undressing each other in front of a fire The smell of rain rinsed hair The goose...
Very nice, tender, and painful.
Wow, 30 years. That's wonderful. Age is in the mind. And as long as two people are deeply attracted to one another, then age shouldn't matter.
I met a woman, well not actually met I speak to her with the written word She appears to be what I am missing We meld into one another's...
Thank you Justagirrl, that is very nice of you to say.
the bullets will win every time over a knife so chose your weapon
Thanks, (as a recent contibutor) it's nice to be appreciated by others who write poetry
Very interresting. Opens the eye of the reader to a new horizon. Takes the reader on a journey that they don't expect when the poem starts. Not of...
I can see many powerful messages in this poem. Great work.
:-) (very nice)
I like it, and was surprised that a 17 year old wrote it. Very nice.
What is there to fear but fear itself, it is said Try facing a gun !
Under cover of darkness People do prey And do things they wouldn't In the brightness of day People in groups Often act worse Gang...
euphoric senses the first time with someone new new soul to bond with
I don't know, but this post is hot as hell.
Nothing wrong with little boobies. The bigger they are, the further they fall after age 35.
So true, so simple, and so often over-looked. Well put.
Its just a bad case on Monday-itus. Seriously, good poem. Keep them coming.
Gotta love experiencing nature, in the great out doors. Nice work dab.
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