Good work, but I have two questions; 1. in the line "French kissing between the throngs, We sing drunken sings, ....."...
I think you have a bright future writing poetry.
A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.......
Kim was born in war-torn Vietnam She grew up, studied hard, passed all her exams She married a womanizer, and had two boys Got divorced and...
Very nice.......
I can relate to this. From both sides of the emotional spectrum.
I got lost in the poetry and didn't see the ending coming. Nice work.
I enjoyed it, thanks.
This poem hits me. I grew up in Boston, almost drown in the Charles River, and was tossed off the T a few times. I love the way you expressed...
Coffee Time It matters not the time of day To me, it's always coffee time Gotta have it, don't you see Caffeine's a friend of mine
What does it mean?
WOW, powerful and sad. I wish many "would-be" run-away teens could read this before they decide to head out on their own.
Thank you all for you comments, yes it was funny. And Major Peacenik, I know it isn't my business if they choose to like repeat the word like five...
So, like I'm at the airport, and what do I see A group of teen-aged girls ahead of me LIKE LIKE LIKE
Cool. I like it.
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I remember climbing out my bedroom window It's late, way past our bed times, I know Across the porch roof and down the lattice I climb through...
My advice (I know you didn't ask, so feel free to tell me to go pound sand) is leave it alone. Withdraw a little. Give it time and he might just...
So what happened between you and your brother to cause this hate you speak of? (The poem is very good)
Very nice piece. Well done.
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