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I think Nitrusx is onto something. Yes, it is a little rough around the edges, but you get the point of the poem. An infatuation for someone that...
My wife, DITTO How boreing is that?
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HA ha ha. masturbating Look at the title again. :-)
Thanks. I just looked it up and read it. Honestly it didn't do anything for me, but it is a nice poem.
It the poetry forum is shit, as you put it, then maybe this piece should just be removed. But wiat, you could do that yourself, couldn't you. You...
I don't think it is so much about the poem affecting ones life, but more something that effects our lives that cause us to write a poem about it....
I am the audience that sits and watches these poems perform before me, and I wiat in anticipation for more. You should all be proud of your...
Had me rolling. Great use of words, in a perverted sort of way. [img] Keep writing man, you're good at it.
Wait, you two know each other? By the way Freaky, the poem was good, but so much anger.
Nice way to look at our boys (and girls) in blue. I have a couple police men in my family, and this is very nice.
Aidan, That was a powerful read. Sounds like you lived much of it, in order to convey such moving, gripping feelings. Very emotional, even gut...
I disagree with the critic. I think it's a great piece of work. You just described millions of kids going through hell in school and millions...
I can see this happening...........[img]
I have seen many rhyming scheems on "sonnets", but I have not seen this patern before. Also, I don't see the clearly defined "14" lines. Just my...
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I like the style you chose for this piece.
Sounds like a troubled relationship. Very good piece of work, in my opinion.
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