i was in awe after reading this...very nice rhythm, soothing almost....this was my favorite stanza...
i agree w/ gdhmomchild...the lack of the word breaks the flow and i found my mind wandering a bit b/c i was focusing on replacing yr w/ your and...
wow....i swear to god i am the biggest fan of poety that flows and that was amazing....its hypnotizing....thank you for that poem....
i must admit...i saw ur age and for a second i thought it was going to be terribly cliche...and i appologize...i was thoroughly impressed...good...
no...thank you!
awesome....i find it amazing how u can say so much w/ so little...not many ppl can pull that off...
i love ur poetry...ur honesty...i liked #2 the best but they were all wonderful...
i just love ur title...its a good title...
these were all of my fav lines...
thank you.....
:) i really enjoyed this...it was great...it flowed well and the way it was written i could feel the intesity and the confusion...good job...
those were my fav lines...i liked this piece....
Harmony vs Discord was my fav too...i liked the flow and the feel of it....
uhm...the first two lines were the best in the poem...i liked those lines...but to tell u the truth, i found the "interresting illustrative"...
i agree w/ the above...some of the lines are too wordy...i do the same thing a lot of the time...just work on flow a little....
Hughes spoke of dreams deferred well mine was a dream denied and I've been humbled in this empty light a stunning debutante in a condescending...
:) thank you...you all make me happy...
yep...i liked...good flow...
ok...now i get it...and i feel u did a very good job addressing the subject and bringing it to life...thank you for the explanation, and for this...
i absolutely love your poetry...i have spent hours reading poem after poem of yours and you never cease to amaze me....you are so real and honest...
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