Just post em. People are generally nice in their critiques, and even when it's a little harsh, it's almost always constructive criticism.
Don't really know if this goes here, but I figured since it is all true, and it's pretty confessional stuff, it best fits under "memoir". It's not...
Craziness! I wrote a poem titled "Oh Woman" very similar to this not to long ago. Feel free to check it out:...
Very cliched, i know, but sometimes when you're in love, the tritest things ring so true.
It’s something in the way That she rests her head upon my shoulder How it fits perfectly As the beautiful smell of her long brown hair Graces my...
Very erotic. Sometimes the rhymes feel a bit forced. Good poem overall though. Any room for word economy?
Haven't written in a while, but i somehow got the urge to write this after reading Allen Ginsberg's "Howl". Enjoy.
Hmmm these sound a lot like song lyrics to me. And as lyrics to a song, there pretty good. But as poetry, there are a few areas which you could...
May we rest in peace We who liked to take romantic strolls Along the Long Island Sound May we rest in peace We who looked happily into each...
I'd like that very much, but I think our lack of existence might get in the way of such a friendship.
While it is well written, i can't help but feel like it's a bit cliched and tell-y. Instead of just telling us about your search and struggles,...
Are you sure you aren't a doctor?
As always, critique as harshly or generously as you wish, so long as it's honest. Hope you enjoyed!
Flakes fall gently upon us Her smile shines so brightly Amazingly, it does not melt the snow My fingers meet hers And I am entranced By beautiful...
thanks for sharing Brootal. Glad you liked it.
If your not yourself, then your bound to wind up at least somewhat resenting the self that you have created. And who wants that? Just be yourself,...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qc4BFYUI3jw&feature=related"]YouTube - life is just a ride Truly inspiring. I'd say RIP Bill, but he...
I finished it some weeks ago, and it was interesting and fairly well written and everything, but I was still somewhat disappointed. He talked so...
Been busy lately, so haven't had much time to write. But, seeing as today was a slow day, I managed to bang this one out. Hope y'all like it: We...
Thanks for the feedback G! Glad you enjoyed it!
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