Haven't you ever laughed at something because it didn't make sense? Does hate without reason make sense?
Great use of pace and repitition, just needs some guitar to go with it.
It could use more details. Little bits of information that make the image of the future seem complete, to provide a more real experience. It would...
Pretty good, although it seems like it should be either longer or shorter. It's in some weird limbo between creative thought and meaningful short...
Ha! great.
Well than I ain't most people, this got a chuckle outa me.
If I care about them, and they want to get married, that's enough. But I'm young, that could change.
Here's to painful birth and healthy babies *Clink*
If he fell, the trees would cry, and someone might hear that.
If you do keep smoking, be careful, when you're not functioning as normal, you can be your own worst enemy in terms of getting caught.
eh, i don't care whether they're four hundred pounds of blubbery fury, or ten pounds of makeup wrapped around a stick. its all about the personality
the complete stories of Theodore Sturgeon (sorry if i got the name wrong) its good, and he's a visionary and all that, but i swear if this guy...
Take a philly cheese steak, wait till it cools down a little, then put peanut butter underneath the meat, and ranch dressing on top of the cheese....
why-notism
Great imagery and details.
It's a hobby for a lot of people, who don't really care whether or not it gets published.
A book I start, got about 9000 words done so far. Should be ten times that when it's done. This is the first chapter, but chapters 1-10 are on my...
It's just as easy for any old joe to lie as it is for a politician or a major news reporter. In a day and age in which technology can fake video...
Two men meet to argue a point, secure in the knowledge they are right. Two intelligent men meet to argue a point of veiw,...
I know of two reasons that are inherent with child molestation. One is the obvious physical danger, especially to girls. Pregnancy during the...
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