thank you. i appreciate the support. that last two lines actually started the whole poem...for me anyway. this show was on tv about kidnapped...
it needs more... how about....like a swipe from reep....for the last line i think it would sum up death pretty good...imo good luck
shorty but a goody
thanks for the review...hope you all get a chance to read my other poem. i believe i titled the thread... you inspire me. a peice im really...
i like across the lake. you started the peice with a question and executed it quite nice. i did something similar check it out and tell me what...
hey man i really liked it...i honestly didnt know who that godess was till you cleared it up... check mine out and tell me what you think...it...
can you create life and give it its tragic ending? ...the life grenade disolves the candle lit fog ...explodes and leaps into my soul true power...
no one listenes no one gains we're just spys in the house of pain like smart mimes we hold the truth its in our knowledge and through our youth...
wow! that second one really captures my thoughts...a little easier to read if your trying to reach a crowd of non poets.
hey man...i feel your pain. i love the part you said it was dragging you to nature...thats what we all need...to feel alone in this world and...
thank you brotha ive always been interested to poetry but held back because its not or wasnt the cool thing to do...but a life experience later i...
if everyone who has viewed replied whats on their mind....this site would be alive!....i guess nothing is sacred in this place either.
i need critisism. does this make sense to anyone?
Blackened heart made of gold anorexic face to which its fed "just pull my plug" he cried, he said "You dont want to relive my day!" with one last...
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