Not bad, though if you want to use it as a song simply for the flow of it you might want to add a little more rhyme. The rhythm isn't bad, but...
Not a bad poem. Great message of course, though over expressed simply because of Pink Floyd's statement, no one will do it better in my opinion....
Quite lovely
I like the random thoughts that have to do with this one room. Though some people may not understand it's beautiful in it's simplicity
Field and Forest Alison Von Brown I am a field and forest at different times within my soul you may find, a wide open...
I like your descriptions and simply what you choose to describe. Though the pace makes the poem hard to read without akward pausing. Try...
I like your poem... is that about our walk together?
Very well written, comma's work as sufficient pauses though.
I agree with 7leafclover.
Some people didn't like because they don't find that Kate Hudson a good actress. Um did anyone else think she was absolutly amzing in that movie...
i like it, it really tries to show some of the reality to dating.
I don't know what to do. My friend and i have been in contact for about 2 years. Although he currently is on the east coast at school we have...
Exellent i'm happy somone understands how good he is. I have never been to one of hiss shows yet but i'm going to him and Yonder Mountain and...
Well if you feel a true connection chances are she will to. look for sign that she digs you, suggest that you do something at your site after....
Celebrate- Rare Earth I just want to celebrate another day of living! I just want to celecrate, another day Life!
I know there are Keller Williams's fans out there but i haven't met/known any of you. I personally think he is a guitar guiness and deserves a...
Divided Sky, Simple, Free are more upbeat songs but if you want some slow love songs. Wading in the Velvet Sea is a good one. Any song from...
I'm sorry but i find anyone who can pump multiple books out within a year sucks! Sure he has a hit evey once and a while but the mayjority of his...
PART ONE The sun seemingly present present before the beginning of time. Becoming an attraction for this wandering mind. On this day, created...
I really like Meeting, and although 13 is weird and the message is somewhat buried within your attempt to be abstract it accomplished being unique...
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