I think of myself as a pretty cynical woman, but I got a little bit of sunshine in my head right now. After recently spending some time regularly...
I cannot understand the world of my brother In his world Berlin is just a few steps away And the corner shop a lifetime away He'll decide to...
Nice twist at the end. I find it a little stiff, though.
Love Poem to my Existence in this World I love you! You know that. I want to dance and spin around And have sunshine and rain cascade down onto...
Is this meant to make sense...? (not being mean, but I'm almost completely lost here)
It's "Haizimen" ???. It means "children". I happen to be able to speak a little Chinese. Then something something in summer. I want to say don't...
lol I'm curious about this song. Who's it by?
I press the button I start drumming on my bong Hai zamune is how it starts It's singer is a girl She sends the music out to me From her dark mouth...
Nice. You should try writing prose. There's so much in there. The only thing that comes to mind on the first read was the lengths of the lines....
The End of the Day Naked, I step into the water. The water level rises, Ripples bounce off of the sides. I immerse myself. The day spreads out...
Could you explain it a little? Is "I" talking to a person or a thing?
I don't get it. What's it talking about?
It's about flying?
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It's a little vague and unfocussed for my tastes. After a second read I still come away feeling like I haven't read anything. Next time could you...
Punctuation? I think it would be more effective. And I think "pink and cobalt" souns better. I quite like it, though.
no - cah-ruh-mel
cah-reh-mel
It took the "istan" from the last one, and I think must have filled the first "i" in. :) Yeah, it's a novel. "There can seldom have been so...
An acronym is like... NATO, or laser (Light Amplification by the Stimulated Emission of Radiation). A word made up of other words, usually the...
Separate names with a comma.
