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  1. rambleON

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    South Detroit: A city in the grips of a Empire reaching
    It's fleeced so deep by a void so deceiving it's unceasing
    Squeezed down into submission by the greedy seizing
    What's left is the hallow echo of yesterday's wallow
    Silently dissolved into such dainty, empty, shadows
    Entire neighborhoods shut down as the fallout follows
    The gritty streets depict what the formulas predicted
    Sullen dreams, a sedated city calculated in cobwebs
    The reality is born unto us all with our mercantile smiles
    Only in our pride we raise this monster in mud and mire
    And looking on are our Masters drinking lighting in bottles
    Pleased at the progress, thanking charts on the models
    They are surly drunk off their own fornication no doubt
    A redolence of scotch lingers as they take occasion now
    Sitting pretty above ghettos in high rise vocation homes
    They know how to manipulate the ends that need shape...
    While the people plead in cages tolerating this great rape

    But,

    Below Masters shallow dawn, sits danger so dirty
    A Detroit born woman goes up to visit Master early
    A young whore she is, she climbs up the stairs at thirty
    Her womb is very barren and she's surly hungry. Very.
    Searching for a vein first... she injects then knocks...
    Summoned for another gut pounding day on the job
    They go into her while she's spitting broken glass
    Across the box spring shot down holding her ass
    She fingers a razor blade out of her tissue
    She slices deep and seems dazed but continues
    The Master falls as she bleeds the joker
    Another day, another dollar...tomorrow star over
    South Detroit, a city in the grips of a people dying
    An Empire trying to be the pride of thug life rising
    Fleeced so deep by a memory of yesterday's wallow
    Today a rich man's sorrow is now a poor girls bravado
     
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    Sharpen the edge of my dancing blade
    So even friends see its slashing shape
    Then fashion dragon feathers on its hilt
    So even enemies feel its thrashing guilt
    Then paint my face blue as midnight sky
    Establishing a silhouette of me, the Samurai
    Then quicken my steps with a veteran march
    As to rivet my walking with an electric spark
    Rest on my shoulders a charge of Asian lore
    Speaking Korean-German words of ancient worlds
    Follow its speech into the expanse of galaxy
    Keeping under the hood of a twilight canopy
    Reflect off my sword the constellation Orion
    Then watch him and I joust in his star asylum
    My friends see the Hunter and I prancing
    Him lowering a crown of thorns on my head laughing
    Even my enemies see the coronation glow this night
    And wonder who coordinated this cooperation rite
     
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    Up the ante, up shift the Lamborghini
    shut up and give me what I need, I'm speedy
    from dawn till dusk it's just all luck completely
    from one once, to two ounces of weed really
    love over easy, normally peeled in the evening
    I was believing, see me believing my thinking
    envision a seafaring greeting bottled and beaten
    In ink even, says it brings freedom past some teaching
    it's silent, no noise screaming from any ceilings
    (I ask what's meaning without reasoning by elitists)
    this brings me to knees, singing along with weeping
    rinsing me inside, instincts were wrong lifelong. I'm sinking
    re-syncing cycles pause: The song Sonata on....I'm wrinkling.
    This opera god
    Did not belong
    A clean spirit.
    I pray thee YAH
     
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    Do you ever do any open mic nights or readings? The way you use rhyme and alliteration makes me read your pieces aloud. Like "South Detroit," and "Opera Inside," of your most recents.
     
  5. rambleON

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    old written, moving it to this thread

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    My mind shattered into pieces and I fell on both knees crying
    atop fallen shards of daggers, trenched omniscient and implying
    knowledge of myself. Of my hurting, my lying, its cheating pendants
    that's all I seemed to do and I was exposed, under red fluorescents
    a pungent reminder of the medicinal properties of karma
    its chemicals and articulation, stitching my hearts fall

    Lacerations etched a maze of blisters on my sunlit body
    and I couldn't feel them. I was euphoric from the punishment probably
    and I chased the high again and again, shooting up its ornate arrow
    its feathers flared out of my existence, its tip a sharp soothing voice
    of good company and shoestring comforts, coolly poised
    it contracted a smile from me, amusing my lipid shackles
    an inner Jackal laughing insipidly, choking on erratic crackles
    it resonated throughout my circuitry of unabated servitude
    just now tasting the fruit of my labor, fully ripe it knew

    I reached one arm up and held on for another first day
    When the world felt correct and so thirsty someway
    Or any other conviction of universal truth
    So orderly and prescribed and very vital
    to my own deception

    I saw the distant churning and turning
    of clumsy vultures circling and swerving
    consistent random patterns in the sky
    I knew then I was their fertile soil, once I die
    I felt un-proportionally top heavy and thought
    a map of redemption could find me and be caught
    or be found if I swayed against them long enough
    for more time to play my last card, a two of jaded hearts
    desperations only hope, blindly bluffing a fools baited dart

    I envisioned their hooks clamping down
    on my leathery flesh, blood damp and brown
    shampooed and conditioned into soft raw material
    As imperial as the true color of eternal sun shine
    I clenched my teeth, waiting for the interval pain to subside
    waiting for the last call...


    And so I faced my Judgment over and over
    chasing my own sins around and around again
    but never quite getting anywhere beyond
    the Saviors soothing hand, grabbing at straws
    because the Devil was sort of behind him, pulling
    but ahead now, controlling in a relative way
    and while I fell into lucid dreams
    and lost all to irrational fantasy
    he never spoke again with much words to say
    content that I will suffer a life times worth
     
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    What is Repetition? It's the itch inside which only mimics rhythm. Like any written wisdom profaning some theorem of fiction. It's the frontiersmen on a gentlewoman. Would her pregnancy be Christian or are his children victims? Redundancy or Machiavellian? To each his own in this, in this his decision. This instant audition has just arisen, a natural pulse in a paroxysm of opinion. Don't know? Drink then. This superstition serum is a syrup of your own religion? Don't matter much, because the circuits of your worship are called courage...Wired in repetition of Spirit by the unobserved Observant.
     
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    So I've
    Been too down in the gunk for me to just...
    Just what ?
    Just too much oomph for me to...guess what ?
    Truth
    I see it in the young; and once is too much
    The look of sons all over, all under the sun
    Resinous from the iron-ons, all of the sum
    Fire bombs. In the slum. First of the month.
    Fixed on the thirst of the third, dirt on our tongue
    Scorn from a kiss as a storm is before a calm

    Birth of the jam praised the Lord of the gun
    Tongue of the lamb slays the life of the scum
    In the breath of his lung is a voice of a love
    The days come when the noise of his light
    Will plunder all the void out of the heights
    When the joys in our joint unite. And untie
    Smiting the knights of the night, taken alive...
    So I've
    Been up on the down, down on the ups
    What ? Too much truth for me to just
    Bust up that easily, I trust this to the Judge
    Live down the gun, peacefully up on His touch
    This is me stuck to the plunge, up on the trust
    Not on a crutch but again, needing that touch
    All of the dust go back to him, back to The Just

    ***

    Spoilers rush out toward all these dry bones
    Going nowhere, insomuch as the wind blows
    While others remind them: only Spirit divides asunder
    Wherefore the former burn by sulfur ?
    And the latter know only blood atones ?


     
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    Spit out the rule book. Like a fool should. Drop out of school kids. Just more substitutes for the students. True if...Hey, if proof was a paste, then put it on my toothbrush! Humans. Stupid. Swish-swash drool from our youth up. Lust. Gloss with Como tally vu lips. Flicker eye lids. The loosest forms of prudence. Sewage. Ruined. Polluted. Sir, what can we say of these institutions? In you. Innuendo of Nintendo. Let's group hug.

    Joey Google with Mary Macintosh. Both in the back. Off the rocks with Jonny Applesauce, at his pad. Oh my God, there's talk already and thoughts of the unplanned father land. Applause, and thank you 2014 Grads.
     
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    logic. out of body tonic. ticking like a bomb. stop it
    toxic. coming out biologic
    electronics hooked on phonics. some summer once something from robotics.
    some summer murder.
    words and sense. sticks and stones. and bones.
    and some summer murder.
     
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    Turn out, tune in. The outer man hears his inner kid. He's infrared, he's made of mirrors and broken shit. It's in his head? No. He transmits louder than he's ever been, being dim.

    Lighting whips. Flashes images.

    Now it's healing pivotal limbs. By photosynthesis with insulates; in capsules of protective (parenthesis). Mother regenesis. Walking degenerate. He's so innocent. Father, Isn't it ?

    Thy Kingdom come. Thy will be done. In this establishment ! A sinking ship gets another week (it thinks) to be the championship.

    Turn out, tune in.

    Be seated amid intellect, when thunder is imminent. Where rain resembles the howl of hallow disconnect. No smoking, no introspect.

    Turn out, tune in. Grab a balloon and smoke a cigarette.
     
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    Everybody is a teacher. Epiphanies make leaders.
    Shoots and Ladders and climbing it with demeanor.
    Everybody is so sure. Measuring facts with folklore.
    Blind booked worm, the cannibal is now carnivore.
    Experts with an excerpt, institution opinion whores.

    Nothing is next door. Nothing roars that is not open to import or to explore. Man's oratory. Handmade in laboratories, manmade authority over what was otherwise our normalcy. Openly ignores his own mortality. A broken bone bleeds, this is the hilarity. He's a pair. A thief when he's not the bourgeoisie, chief when he's indeed the nobody.

    Stare at me.
     
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    coloring an oppugnant earth, like
    song birds singing in thunderstorms
    exuberating the mind, renewing world
    appertaining to the anointing of God
    radiating no ego. Shine off then on
    became understanding appearing niggardly
    been seen naked sensing unseen precepts
    all around us
    considered all the unconsidering
    inhibiting hype
    limiting pilfering
    welcome to planet ocean
     
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    Oblique monolith at Giza
    Maginot line of the French
    Wall of the great Orient
    Aqueduct of Roman Nile
    All beguiled disposition of necessity
    Indispensable, now phylogeny nodes
    Branches que the builders
    The trunk: financier of development
    The roots dissipate evil nutrient
    The resistant hunger strike
    Opportunists feed a new world
    Little leaves blown off mother
    Pollination strategy: shock and awe
    DNA matches old colossal carve
    Know how of ancient working
    Treaty of betrayal, ready rehearsal
    Seeking in the name of blood line
    Yesterday’s construct refined
    Today the house is built
    Flat, sharp angle line
    Rib cage unable to sigh
    Stiff outside, hot inside
     
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    In one life I was a farmer born lowly into blistered lands
    worn into existence with a mixture of soil and salted sweaty hands
    It was then, against all odds, that I gave to Kingdoms and country
    feeding fat children of old wealth, in need of wheat thins and barley

    The Nobles too, fed from my garden; from my hand like sour pigs
    I raised them, watched them harden- from kids to powdered Wigs
    I saw them rise out of The Dark Ages, their power consolidation
    a blanket of death housing a serpent frown around all our nations
    squeezing my life as a puppet, of course pulling at sliver strings
    until I died before Monarchs, but not before learning a few things

    In another life I was born an Indian to a Seminole Chiefdom
    I lived in unison and sung songs in one regional anthem
    I had unintelligible wisdom and blossomed first like a native flower
    deep rooted in ancestral soil under humid rainy showers
    I grew peacefully under one million smitten Sun sets
    learning again, yet another dialect a kin to written alphabets
    in my last breath of fruition the Spanish fleets surprised us
    we offered tobacco and corn, they gave us viruses

    I died.

    In another life I was a field hand in a sea of King Cotton
    lost in some political translation, picking until soon forgotten
    The smell of Yankee gun smoke flared obnoxiously to a Rebel Yell
    and war broke out again, for freedom but not really in this Federal hell
    Three hundred years later I achieved second class citizenship
    get out of jail free card used to wipe up the same Ole shit again, shit

    I died.

    In another life I was Amelia Earhart flying a Sigma air plane
    navigating blue oceans, clouds asphyxiated highly in my name
    I crashed and disappeared on purpose for my own amusement
    history ignores and creates fiction for those who never knew it

    In another I was engineering Democracy as a factory laborer
    lambs for lions in war profiteering, riveting helmets on toy soldiers
    my name was Rosie and I was told to hate ambitious Hitler
    I had stars and stripes to dream and awoken lonely to whisper
    softly to myself that my life will only be that of some unknown
    I will never age, never die, never know how fulfillment is thrown

    I died ninety nine thousand times and lived one million years

    I painted caves with blood of rivals and smiled
    I sustained flint lock shots of musket tipped with vile
    I had been a Titanic passenger, drowned but survived
    I crashed stock markets and thrived, swallowed thorns and lied
    I had been a prize fighter in the golden age of sport boxing
    I walked batters and pitched no hitters, old age never knocking
    I wrote lies for news papers and sold Ivory Coast sweet tooths
    I fucked Marlyn Monroe and told Jackie Onassis half truths

    The thing is, I live until I die
    only to be reborn with Adams eye
    I learned to believe half of what I see
    and nothing of what I hear superficially
    always witnessing the pains of history

    Crying, Lying, Cheating, Hurting
    that's all we seem to do, so good
     
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    I stood atop rows of pale stone
    stale markers of our own living bravery
    sprawling out in a harbor, foggy as Ole slavery
    vivid in still memory, on this hill
    serving as a cemetery
    a sea of white chess pieces
    combed by somber cries
    blacklisted forever under these
    November owned lavender skies

    My mind was now a radar station
    ready to receive, some how in relation to
    the sum of all parts now in sedation, true
    the stories of those buried around me
    their vibrations, code and oddities
    situations of the dead; molten dichotomies
    I sat scowled, feeling on mushy green grass
    the blood of coffers, fools gold seeing finally at last:


    I saw ten thousand jokers pursing dark smiles, amusing The Great Spirit
    dancing on golden strings of desire, striking depths of murderous merit

    I saw five hundred bats scream through double rainbows
    muffled against the sun, on euphoric flights of gold in kilos

    I saw The Great Plains gutted entirely by bloodthirsty vacation sport
    trails of decay and long lines of Apachee hurriedly sanctioned as escorts

    Above, twenty soaring eagles dropping eggs randomly in support
    bracing a last full measure laced in a circumference of sorts
    signaling red in valentine preference, to walk fine lines
    in accepted mainstream reference this one divine time

    I heard one million battle cries at once, the collective of mankind
    each different but the same, all reflective and confined
    to eternal rest and affluent stings of angel tipped-kisses
    their pasty bliss digital in glitches
    strangled by eloquence lipped
    in eclipses

    I kissed my fingers and offered love to the master God
    I was dismissed I figured, a windsurfer on a faster squad
    all was not settled or clean, or as free. or as simple as it seems
    I realized I saw many things, and I remember seeing meaningful meanings...

    I closed my eyes

    Some time after that, I painted all my windows black
    I was now the ship and my mind the bottle
    my face long and my stare empty, soulless
    two pupils larger than dinner plates
    staring point blank at absolutely nothing
    forcing every ounce of energy to move my Queen of hearts
    behind a stage curtain called Jupiter
    wrapped in a moist membrane of my ancestral past

    I was gone now

    I will suffer through the awkwardness
    mostly because
    I do not exist
     
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    Digging up your roots you say.
    Going back. At last.

    So you dig.
    Dig for justification.
    Dig for validation, understanding.
    Digging to fill new wholes
    With old dirt.
    Digging for truth.

    As fast as the shovel pivots
    As fast as you can bear the exposure
    Of how things really happened
    Not how you interpret them now
    But rather, of a downward momentum
    Not just of the shovel, but of life's pull
    Though both are striking the same plate
    With an insatiable appetite to satisfy the urge
    To know the absolute dexterity of truth.
    You dig. You and shovel.

    Except the shovel is sure of itself
    It will spark as it clanks against time
    Conversely, you will collide and fold in
    Coil up as a double helix of what once was
    Wrapping around the past with a sure complexity
    And in the process a partnership is solidified
    A cooperation forging a link to the past
    Of steel networking its desire to function correctly
    You of your questioning, explanations and motivations
    As an organic body exercising it's right to inquire.

    You discover quickly that what you dug up
    Is easily arranged against what you thought
    and what is,... was, is really not once was
    But only an image of what you wanted it to be

    You pick up the past and uncoil this information
    You soon realize new uses of old trauma bases
    Realize rungs of dead end roads, of bad choices
    More insightful now than ever you point this up
    Into the sky and climb on the burden of your
    new way forward.

    With a face like the sun.
     
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    Things...

    If you are a Mainstream atheist you are the product of an economic super structure.

    If you're Western poor you are fearfully hated. If you're Capitalist rich you are lustfully loved.

    If you are Greco religious you're hypocritically vain. If you're Christian pure you're credibly few.

    Nonreligious poor have more in common and are better equipped to receive the bible than a great number of Western Christians.

    If you are a Capitalist you are a vampire.

    Man is capable up to known limits. A stubborn fact to mainstream academics.

    If you're part of the working mass you're the true powers-that-be.

    If you're racist you hate yourself.

    If you're Capitalist rich you have shed innocent blood.

    If you have been State educated you have been trained to be an exploitable commodity.

    In the Roman mind bears the mark of the beast.

    If you're a worker your wages are set by the socially necessary minimum to keep you alive and to produce the next exploitable generation.

    Without the means of production held in common, the majority are alienated from their natural destiny and become slaves to the few who suck the blood of the sufferers.

    In the United States and in other oppressed nations freedom by definition means you are only free to be exploitable. This is what Thomas Jefferson had in mind.

    The Protestant split from Roman Christianity factors in with the rise of Capitalism and away from landed Feudalism. This is the chief reason why Western Christianity rejects the social law of the creator by doctrines of Capital, and thus a hypocrisy.

    The Untied States appears to be a righteous lamb but is a lying serpent.

    A product is only worth the socially necessary labor time that produced it.

    Under the Capitalist matrix, many workers are mere extensions of the 'machine', reduced to animal status and do not have leisure to meet their creative, social and intellectual needs.

    It's difficult being Christian and American. It's a contradiction being a capitalist and a Christian.

    Russia and China were never Communist.

    Today, man as a whole is certainly not more advanced than the ancients.

    The rise in wages will guarantee the proportional rise in commodities.

    Capitalism by it's own laws and inner contradictions will one day destroy itself. The void will be filled by justice and equity.

    This change will be brought about by the creator's just spirit working in the minds of revolutionary men and women.

    Contrary to capitalistic Western dogma, a mans hope is not with death. Rather it is in his own unity against the oppressor with the knowledge and awareness of the true Devine creator.

    The oppressing class will cease. This has been in motion for the past 2000 years. The memory of it will be purely destroyed.

    What is to be done?
     
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    things II...

    the merchant class revolution against the monarchy was disguised as religious reformation...the Protestant then came out from under the monarchy a new reformed animal, capitalistic, and the new oppressing class

    the mantra of revolution in the U.S. today is a contemporary movement to reshuffle the merchant class order by its defenders of the status quo

    the word of the Creator first serves to expose, to the bone, what you are made of. After there is no choosing a side; it is now seen clearly: you have been tracking either on one side or the other. repentance is at the heel

    in popular society, justice now becomes a matter of legislating realities where a man dressed as a woman is, in the pure sense of Greco-Roman truth, a wholesome new creation

    in a society that has replaced personal relationships, brotherhood, community with imposed relations with capital, the family unit is torn to pieces and has no function in mutated form. The woman has no use as a woman, the man has no use as a man. their utility and creativity flourish in a free society, but render perverted in a society built solely on exploitation and corruption

    good cannot not come from evil, that is to say the Western world cannot at the same time be inherently evil and be just

    encouraged ignorance in the information age and under the near zenith of capitalist culture, births a formidable foe waiting to devour on the already steep mountain climb to understanding. Enlightenment today is now in context of culture, i.g. the discovery of a new Star Trek language

    if the majority follow a philosophical ideal or other, it is probably false. for example, modern so-called Christianity or its sister, pop-culture Atheism

    in most cases, students come out of universities just as ignorant as they went it...the only gain is indebtedness, an increase in the labor pool, more competition among the poor, and lower wages

    an irony: The earth and its raw materials are the real and only wealth. But the poor have been fooled to believe that the capitalist and his commodities are real wealth; and are trained to compete against each other for the opportunity to buy back from the capitalist the necessities of life--which have been stolen whole. Moreover, the poor have been tricked to believe that the land is virtually useless. It's good only for pleasure and walks through the fenced in forest. The capitalist is none the more merrier.



    There is a specter haunting the developed world
    Western powers are in a holy alliance to exercise it:
    The spirit of truth
     
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    A needless intervention

    Beyond Old Roy Harpers farm, out past the sovern grass of kings
    Rests a fertile plateau surrounded by mountains, West of all things
    And below the valley peaks sat a cabin, garden and one lost wallet
    Hardness lingered there, of bloodshed, I felt no hope...never saw it

    I freaked the fuck out.

    I go below its mountain prairie and drop to its colorful depths... dig
    Here I can take on anything, overflowing in the proper prospective
    Down, but above the kingdom, above but below the clowning fools
    In the Shadow Valley, walking the plank over the drowning pools
    Found a Cannabis plant, heirloom. Of it, I'll grow the herbs you'll eat
    Planted against a consensus, full bloom under our World Elites
    It's too cheap, too versatile to control by The Few, so no money profit
    So many uses, too much gossip, preaches Mary Jane the Pot prophet
    A transplant survivor to the over exposure of law
    A legacy of its high alive but hidden by a greedy flaw

    I smoke a bud and the darkness swirls to nirvana
    A pink unicorn named Charlie came, to hit this marijuana

    Back above, a gust of wind sounded, twirling the alarm
    Old information was dug up while Nations took up arms
    Crops were once abundant, buds hit hard, insane
    Communities were green, selfefficent and creative brains
    A man grew here on this old family plot
    So much dank, he smoked out what he got
    In a day of defeat weed was finalized to the boss pits
    Nothing but a memory photographed in his lost wallet
     
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    You nailed it, and stuck the landing!
     
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