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  1. rambleON

    rambleON Coup

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    A memoir for the down trodden, to the ill forgotten:
    Drift a mile in worn hauls, become her problems
    Be the barefooted strange girl on a food fit
    Apple bottom, candy cigarette, her nude lips
    Shirt soaked suction tight, clung to perfect body
    Provoking your silent awakening, pop a molly
    Sail. Over a full moon glowing underwater
    Below a sky befallen, darkened for the hour
    Hallow November, misery in tones of northern light
    Languish the sun because it rolls over horizons height
    Be you. Changed to never trust yourself
    Because a mile in you will never trust yourself
    Don't judge her, until you lived her book
    The cover is girl, and the material is rook
    Be you girl interrupted. All pumped full of lead
    Swimming with sharks in her head (stole that line: KittenX)

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  2. youngatheart

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    oh. i like your stuff, very much. i love stream-of-consciousness poetry slams. thankyou. maybe i will join you. if you don't mind.
     
  3. rambleON

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    thanks for reading my work youngatheart...please join me...it's lonley around these parts.

    may I ask you how many of my writtens in this thread you have read ?
     
  4. rambleON

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    I stand favored, a girl in a world run by mimes
    Under a lemon sky, lime swirling to dye my mind
    Colors and sty, pigs in my eye yet I peel the swine
    I cry at my hurt, feel the pangs of living in sickness
    Twisted up and evicted in this ditch with little forgiveness
    Tears of peppermint trace my cheek down fields of rye
    Wet yellow poppy scent, toxins turn the wheels of sky
    I'm seeking signs, the hour of day I will die...
    Finding me is a Power up on High, cold fire in cold fry
    But in between a gulf is fixed, an invisible memo of strife
    Separating a Kingdom above from the divisible life of lice
    I can't sow one to the other except I slow my pulse
    Know the heart in heaven or discard this flesh as dross

    I wish this: To see sack cloth and ash, fire and black
    One million birds circling the great wrath of Man
    Seas of crimson, sloshing blood bound empire
    Vampires in open sun dipped in mud and mire
    To see decay of Kings and the squeal of Queens
    Wroth kindled, without meaning of these things
    Facing a mirror against their tax and terror
    In their mind as medicine, cut by axes and error
     
  5. rambleON

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    I saw the sky churning as oceans of ashes
    Turning down rays of fire, fallout & flashes
    Burning up the night, kissing noble November
    Mixing the air with embers, opals, & splendors
    Exhaled from the heaven as iconoclastic flow
    To earth, blasting lumens across the globe

    I got down on my knees, hands spread apart
    Beseeching Elohim, believing he sees only hearts
    And if I am worthy, spare me not any concern
    I have kin, they wouldn't be ready to discern
    I closed my eyes, perceiving a centurion sky
    Wrapping my mind against seven billion cries

    I saw,

    Ten thousand angels playing Chutes & Ladders
    With tools of harvest to tear truth from answers
    I saw all World powers raise up skeleton armies
    Behaving odd against a coming elephant tsunami
    Humanity running against the Host of Heaven
    Soaking up blood in the body fields of tension
    I saw Napoleon in front riding with a battle flag
    And Alexander in red planing amplitude in rags
    Following them were one hundred million soldiers
    Waging to circle a tree called Life, to mow it over

    The branches were thick trunks of Lebanon cedar
    At the base, a colossal end with a genuine reaper
    The sky furnace above waxed hot, torching like hell
    The tree went up in flames and the armies swelled
    The air was thick clouds out chromatic volcano
    I blinked my eyes finally to behold the inferno!

    I saw,

    One hundred million necks hang from the Great Tree
    Dangling in the dense wind, swaying like quaint leaves
    A million silhouettes peppered the skyline like salt licks
    Collecting ash and scorch, limed with motor and brick
    All at once I heard the collective all cry out, gasping
    A last full measure asking mercy for trespassing

    A few moments later,

    I looked at both my hands, lifting my head high
    Giving praise to Elohim that he let me be left alive
    I spit ash out, smacking my lips to the taste snickers
    I vowed to repent and eat the Bread in the Scriptures
    I buttoned up my coat, tonight a hot wind grows
    Protecting me against the infinite day of hot coals....
     
  6. osiris

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    The Elohim are an entire race of Gods and Goddesses besides Jehovah (or Yahweh, whichever you prefer, neither transliteration is actually correct), according to the Book of Genesis, so they're probably dealing with your prayers by committee, and each one adds its own little quirk, I'm sure. Far more fun to play the roullette wheel than always have the same drudge pouring out the same vindications and absolutions.
     
  7. youngatheart

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    so so many of your writtens that i am smitten. i read them all..i fell hook line and sinker, stinker, you; little smatterer of bread and butter words;for the eager beaver hungry at heart and slippery souled.
     
  8. rambleON

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    Elohim is a title. Much like how 'god' is a title. Elohim can mean magistrate or high judge etc. Other nations have Elohims, which you allude to in your post above. YAHUWAH is the only true living Elohim. YAHUWAH or YHWH is correct and is a correct translation. The ancient scrolls have this spelling and bear witness despite the Gentiles (Europeans or the Sons of Japhet. see Gen 10:5. I am a Gentile by flesh, so are you probably. Sasha ?) taking out the Fathers name and replacing it with pagan idols (GAWD, JAHOVA and JE ZEUS)

    Javohva means wickedness, sin and rebellion in the Hebrew. It is not the Father's name despite what pagan, mainline Christianity teaches.

    That is why IsaiYAH (Isiah), JerimiYAH (Jeremiah), EzickEL (El as in Elohim), DaniEL, JoEL, ObadiYAH, MicYAH (Micah) all have either YAH or EL as in Elohim/YAHUWAH in their names. Hebrew names meant something and contained the creators name in them, unlike our western names today that are picked all willy nilly and mean little.

    FYI the 'jews' in the land of Israel today are in fact Gentiles. Gentiles have stolen the true Ysraelites identity. (ask me who they are today and I will teach you according to scriptures. And you will be no doubt offended. Because truth is offensive).

    You will scoff at this truth, for I perceive you to be an unbelieving fool, an individual with no knowledge or understanding of who the Creator is along with 99% of modern day Christians.

    If the name YAHUWAH offends you, I apologize for that. You are not the first, nor shall you be the last to be offended by his namesake,

    You should know what you are talking about before you speak.

    Isaiah 28:9

    Whom shall he teach knowledge? and whom shall he make to understand doctrine?

    Who, who who ?!?!

    If you wish to discuss more, PM me. I am not going to clog up my thread with suffering you to know doctrine.
     
  9. youngatheart

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    write, write, write, right?
     
  10. osiris

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    I don't wish to discuss it, but I sent you a message anyway. :)
     
  11. youngatheart

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    hobo angel, drop me a line sing me a beautiful song sometime. rhyme, rhyme, rhyme.
     
  12. Flower Fox

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    I kicked the ball like baseball players
    and when I get home runs I die like some
    superficial
    sacrificial
    god
    that walks on sins with a silent mouth
    who rains on the side walk
    taking care of those who are truly
    like Myself
     
  13. rambleON

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    I'm sorry to each and everyone of you.
    I was the gum you chewed.
    Was the fun you used.
    On soles of shoes run through roots.
    Illegible. An incredible imbecile too.
    Tomato juice drunk down artery trough.
    My loss, is gained in strawberry cough.
    Love, laugh, life. Force it.
    Just as pinnacle then in invincible pause
    I was the rum you boozed
    So sorry to each and everyone of you.
    I was the rooster you cooped.
    The pun overused.
    Truth.

    Staring.
    Empty skeleton.
    Wherein. Plenty therein.
    When is my identical twin ?
    Both are expendable. It has been.
    Medical niacin chocking oxygen.
    In my mind as elephant.
    So Roll it up as medicine.
    Set it all up as bowling pin.

    Delineate in all my way.
    Blind my eyes to charcoal haze.
    Dye my mind in mid April-May
    It has been. Water. Purple rain.
    Daisy if I do. Daily regimen.
    Flying under sky adrenaline.
    Exhibit my mental picture.
    Exquisite little sick bird.
    Crush me with a rolling pin.
    I was normal in a loony bin.
    So lost in the Sim City sim.


    To be continued...
     
  14. skyfire

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    very few 'round here can twist words and/or rhyme like you. of your latest, i quite enjoy "pop a molly" and this last one ^^
     
  15. rambleON

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    A remix of Eminem's Lose Yourself. I wrote new lyrics keeping the same cadence. Bold text are stressed and on the beat.

    Prove Yourself.

    [Intro -spoken word]
    Look, if you had one shot, or one opportunity
    To learn everything YAH ever allowed, one truth
    Would you humble down, and serve him only ?
    Yo

    [verse 1]
    YAH's Laws are hardy, aren't hard, cause' our tardy
    There's conflict on our hearts already, all-beat petty
    Lip service, in the churches just flaws and envy
    To rob moms, but they keep on professing
    What YAH spoke aloud, His scroll clouds those so proud!
    They loosen His clout, but the terms don't come out
    They envokin' dolls? Everybody's strokin' Baal
    They mock some now, climb up lower, down!
    Snap back to humility -oh there goes blasphemy
    Oh-there goes Sabbath, we joked
    We so mad, but we don't
    give up that weekly nope, we don't grasp it
    behold, his soul snaps to seize hopes
    She won't answer, they joke
    YAH knows that, but we broke
    Peoples pageant, be lows
    When we grow back to His noble road, that's when it's
    Back to the map again yo, His whole strategy
    We better go answer this omen and hope it won't examine

    [hook]
    We better prove our self to YAHUWAH, Him only
    We know it, you better never let it slow
    You only got one lot, do not miss our chance to grow
    This opportunity runs rungs in a lifetime

    [verse 2]
    Our soul's awaking through His pull that is staging
    This world is YAH's for the shaking
    Take knee kings, YAHSHUA's sword a new whirled boarder
    A worldly life is snoring; YAHUWAH's horsemen
    Close to told them, they slowly wove armor
    Phonies sow dollars, we grow, they all colder
    Thieves go in all rotten, posed to host woes
    Be known as the gold joker
    Moldy roads, YAH only knows
    The Lone father's son shown, we know proper
    Our foes stone and rarely shows his own slaughter
    But hold your loathe cause here goes the Yolked Solver
    These toads don't want Him OH WOE, be bold conduct
    They seduced on to the next Joe who's froze
    We know those and pulled dogma, so the Pope Allah
    Is told, it unloads, I oppose the cajoled, martyr
    But the deceit shows con : da-da-dum da-dum

    [hook]

    [verse 3]
    No more shame, I'mma engage what you call age
    Tear this brother judging Zeus off like truth box staged
    I was prayin' in the sin sinning, the rude all changed
    I've been wooed up and tripped out and fooled off page
    But I wept fighting and accept light in the best designer
    Best believe everybody's obeying the denied writer
    All the rain implied terrified by the
    Fact that YAH's hand set high with eyes alive to
    Lies that we can't survive the night fight of
    Strife for lies randomly, cause man, these hot scams
    Skewed facts don't dry brighter, and there's no beauty
    There's no July Caesar, this is high strife
    And these times are so hot, and it's sitting even hotter
    Tryin' to leave and honor my believe trust, teacher-father
    Caught up between being a martyr and an Americana
    Baby Obama mantra, scheming on Hebrews and too much for me to wanna
    Obey in some slot, another scam or not
    Has sodden me to the point, I'm like a fail I've got
    To calculate a stop, or rend up in wail or rot
    Israel is my only brother running doctrine, Gentile's not
    YAH I love you but this stranger gots to know
    I cannot grow soul in Pagan's plot
    So here I go it's my trot. Abba I will fail you not
    YAHUWAH is THEE only opportunity that we got

    [Hook]

    [Outro -spoken word]
     
  16. rambleON

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    read the scripture not the letter
    see mama in the picture on ya dresser
    eyes pent up, two epicenters where her pestilence peppers
    she said see the sign rendered in the texture
    be the boy measured when the storm sweats the weather
    lament blood, bend shut the percent of treasure you surrendered
    remember life, now a man must represent members of his shelter
    beggars and the debtors that the censors senor with a censure
    cause man, the world is polyester around our collar as this sweater

    Seek the answer not the glamor
    Flee the the cancer of the actors laughter
    see mama in the picture on ya dresser
    eyes wiped out, signs of the texture in the scripture
    she said I'm the boy commander waving a banner anthem
    now a man, I tell her I'm maximus maxim the phantom
    rendering memorandum for my underclassmen madmen
    shot out like a cannon over the canyons of compassion
    penetrating shadows chasms in valleys of dry bone
    we are family of bravado, most with afros and butterfly soul
    juxtapose the majesty of God against the agony of foes who oppose
    we know who gives life and takes it mama
    I read the scripture and not the letter
    I see the sign rendered in the texture
    It's not me in the coma,
    rest in peace fo mama

    words play - slave inc.

    They came to this nation slaves. ABOMINATION
    Chained in invasion, shaken by Obama nation
    Gave em' names of pagan statesmen in enslavement
    Paid them deflation and gave them by-words verbatim
    Fed them bacon and patriotism, radiated in the racism
    Synonym with 3/5th a person, würden by the Germans
    Naked drinking bourbon or exerting hurt in the urban
    The thirst is heard and they will emerge on the verge
    On the wings of a BIRD, perched on the word of its chirp
    Master asks why, goes searching to stop the usurp
    The Most High says, "Come out from among of her"
    Strike lighting, amplified thundered.
    Freeing the slumbered wrung by wonders.
    Brothers and sisters of the true Hebrew.
    Pictures of promise. Sees the Spirit through.
    Gentiles stolen the identity, gave you Zeus.
    Thy destiny is a pedigree, not shameful roots.
     
  17. rambleON

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    [verse 1]
    Hi gents, why do we worship the science ?
    Wanna see the lies which make us so pious ?
    Wanna know why you take lies on the face of the bias ?
    You sense its codex is cold print over your conscience
    Blindfold you know this odor is closer to omit sick violence
    Marijuana armada whether sober or on drama, its bullshit
    Darwin came over on a warship, drawing a drawbridge
    Walking the hornets nest to exalt the tallest gull finch
    Saw water clouds from a forest, water melons in a flora grid
    Used a quarter pound Rosetta pen, monotone in audio tone, then
    Noted them both related to the abominable snow cone (ahem)
    This topic is circular by armatures with binoculars to show nature...
    Came from chemical soup made alive with mans magic eraser
    I'm mad. I know. I see the error
    I'm sad...I'm slow to cold anger
    Oh my God.
    There's no imitator wiser than The Logic Illustrator

    [hook]
    YAH. He's amazing. Is amazing. Who ? Amazing
    YAH. He's amazing. What ? YAH be amazing

    [Verse2]
    Yo mane, time is short, let's do this...
    Yo
    The hour is used up, on cruise control
    It's so unusual
    The get-go is most untruthful (yo)
    Up inside the carnival of this narrow crucible
    Carbonyl in their arsenal aerosol
    I know I used to smoke, it's horrible
    Zero airflow, isotopes pulled up ya nose slow
    Come off ya horror dope with tha holy ghost
    Truth be told, who knows our only hope ?
    I do, wanna see me know HE G.O.A.T ?
    Don't drink the koolaid, don't
    Foul grape juice pours down ya throat
    You already drowned alone
    Ninety-five percent of the world is lied to (yo)
    Revelation twelve-nine spits it better than I do
    Wanna see who broke on tha trump sound ?
    Inside those lines prophesize tha loud count
    "AND THE GREAT DRAGON WAS CAST OUT"
    It's slang tongue some clowns never found (ouch)
    See his sermon on the mount ?
    Be sure to read a version by Hebrew persons
    Not tha white mans, nor preachers or tha churchmen
    Family I'm sick of the lies, you heard me. WHEN ?
    Messiah was black, no promise made to any religion
    He came for Israel, beaten, smitten as it's written (AMEN)
    He coming again, for his sheep, this his mission yo
    This white boy hears his voice in his sleep I HOPE
    Blessed are the meek in spirit and in TRUTH
    Endure this test and be tha proof
    I'm out family
    Off tha sick speed bicycle
    Up on ya toes
    Flee the horror of tha old crucible
    HalleluYAH
    His people be provable and they beautiful

    *&^# outta here
     
  18. rambleON

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    Dream this silence... of a secret
    See a mystery of the Highest Seated
    Between a crisis and ashes of His sequence
    Beat free and unseen, no haphazard in His Spirit
    In your life it symbolizes triumph over demons
    A scream rips through the noise as it rises to deepen
    In a void your iris blows the body of the memory sinus
    Out comes sickness of idols to die under the hottest horizons
    No longer foggy, you deem this secret is His guidance
    You are free now. Clean up the clean up.
    Sip the sweetness some. From His teacup.
    A rope of idols just came out ya vial. Deleted.
    But you still must believe in Gentile science
    Cos back ya go again while they size you in
    In cages of lions and where riots cycle your survival
    Chained down again as a FOOL who knows no "bible"
    You a gnat to them then swallowed by Giants
    A Philistine now and with their baby boo Goliath
    Hunt you down kid, once again by ya blindness
    Guillotines are your schoolmaster minus the rightness
    Machined by the machinists dawning down swords
    Fallen on the lives of the spineless who are DAMN COWARDS.
     
  19. rambleON

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    The golden pendulum swung. In my ear drum. Dunn Dun Dun Dunn. Ugh, I hear dumb. Got my mind, um, up motion slumps. So odd how locomotion adrenalin comes. Gentlemen I'm trembling. Ibuprofen what ? Numbs my whole endorphins some. In ocean of neurons swimming fuct. Now time is frozen. Oh look; there goes a bottle-nosed dolphin sunk. Pumped full of bone-marrow lead. Meddling. Peddling. E.T. phone home. When ? I beg. Unsettling on the bottom of an insomniac bed. A maniac, I Drive my inner man to the Adirondacks with a picnic basket. Contemplate dinner and put lipstick on this chick with acid. Close my eyes and gallop back when the pendulum swung. Dunn Dun Dun Dunn. I can't feel my tongue. It's the golden pendulum kettledrum and I'm not welcomed in.

    What's stupid ? Sniffing life's shoe glue fluids. Lucid sewage just shot up your flute fluent. Little drummer boy phoenix like. Just a cohesive void in this diluted psych. Who knew justice ? Riddled with ripples, types your office off with Mona Lisa lips. Sinus satellite with little elbow room fixed. Sunshine joy with a toned nudest voice; up your bone crease full of noise. I mean it. Mind Zenith. Find Jesus ? Makes you act nut-nuts and sneeze dumb stuff. Double helix on ice; Red-Rum backward now your screws loose boys. MURDERED. Days are spliced; I'm sure it's fervor. Reversed Answers ? Like your crews screwed hurt. Reword these verbs into couplets. Coup gets it. All because DNA coils RNA to deliver NWA to slay this soliloquy.
     
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    Stare at the sun and scorch your two eyes
    Feel the corners dry up as they're cauterized
    The sensation is like drinking acid with alkaline
    Bleaching your corneas into a beautiful oblivion
    Relentlessly hallowing, destroying all skin melanin
    Blink, as this synergy dissolves the retinas white
    Because in your mind crawl armies of parasites
    Pulverizing you, fed by an exercised poltergeist
    And you were their gopher, their torture type
    Pain heals but first your pupils turn to wine
    This is just a fact: what's beautiful is blind
    Now you can't see and the sun is still out
    Tell me, how will you judge others now ?
    Will you play fair, and love your neighbor ?
    Be charitable and remember the stranger ?
    Good because before you live you must die
    Reborn in a sense, with the mind of the blind
    Soon nobody will see and all will be scrutinized
    Discern not by sight, because by the facts of life:
    You don't know a thing until you're sacrificed alive
     

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