winter moon

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by standingdeer, Jan 5, 2005.

  1. standingdeer

    standingdeer Member

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    Stars appear then slightly vanish
    through the northern clouds that drift apart
    revealing the lights of the universe one at a time

    Will I awake to the sight of snow
    dusted from the shoulders of old man winter
    riding in on the elk, an owl perched upon his shoulder
    draging dreams

    Winter moon
    brings delicate fingers to the earth
    a lover of all seasons

    Standingdeer
     
  2. AshtonsMom

    AshtonsMom Banned

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    That particular piece of this one just speaks to me.
     
  3. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Yeah man, this is really good. So are the other ones you posted, you're quite gifted; I hope you keep posting :)
     
  4. Keramptha

    Keramptha Senior Member

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    wow! excellent!
     
  5. Peaceful~Autumn~Shel

    Peaceful~Autumn~Shel Member

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    dude, that's beautiful.
     

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