Who I Am, Who I'll Be.

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Spiritchalist, Jan 27, 2009.

  1. Spiritchalist

    Spiritchalist Member

    Who I am, Who I wanna be,
    That's 2 seperate people,
    and I feel like neither one are me.

    Who am I, not who I am,
    is what we should say,
    how we think,
    and maybe even act that way.
    Do we really know ourselves,
    or just how we see the mirror,
    Do we really know ourselves,
    or am i really something to fear?

    Who i am, Who i wanna be,
    that's 2 seperate people,
    and I feel like neither one are me.

    Who is it that I want to be,
    become, maybe was,
    maybe shouldn't want to be.
    Is it what I do, or how I think,
    Cause Ive got no map to follow,
    got no flare up in the sky,
    My guide is just my heart,
    but thats a long way from healthy.

    Who i am, Who i wanna be,
    that's 2 seperate people,
    And i feel like neither one are me.

    Im walking through life, off the beaten path,
    am I getting somewhere,
    or just scared to look back, amid the aftermath?
    Ill just forge my way ahead, and listen to my heart,
    maybe Ill get where im going,
    or just right back to the start.
     
  2. dreadheadude

    dreadheadude Member

    I really enjoyed reading this, I can relate to not really being who I would like to be.
    The strongest part (To me) was
    "My guide is just my heart,
    but thats a long way from healthy."

    Excellent job!
     

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