Where?

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by bird_migration, May 15, 2004.

  1. bird_migration

    bird_migration ~

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    where does one
    find hope
    without love?

    where does one
    find love
    without hope?

    it is much easier
    to find new
    shoes




    ~ bird​
     
  2. saffronfrancisburnet

    saffronfrancisburnet Member

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    this made me smile..

    how easy it would be if we could find hope love
    together in one box.........

    love n peace from saff
     
  3. purusha

    purusha Member

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    i love your simple little poems, for they leave me with real and complex emotions
     
  4. fulmah

    fulmah Chaser of Muses

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    nice job, bird... this was simple, elegant, and reflective. i'm slightly curious tho, the last line brings to mind a certain pick-up line that would add a twist to this.... :)
     
  5. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

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    Sometimes I can't even find my shoes...:(
     
  6. gdhmomchild

    gdhmomchild Duct tape abuser

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    always easier to find shoes and like KittenX...half the time I can't find them either
     

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