Wandering

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by syd, Feb 1, 2005.

  1. syd

    syd Banned

    This is just a short poem i wrote last year. It was written after a certain experience. Hope you like:

    Wandering with no reason
    Perhaps to find higher meaning
    Rain falling senseless
    Roaming through dusk and dawn fearless
    Lessen your sense of reality
    Deception
    Concealment
    Start feeling the easement
    Of having a life with no feeling
    Except for those of love, happiness and freedom
    Shall it end?
    It all stands to reason
     
  2. Lozi

    Lozi Senior Member

    wow. i can imagine wandering in a field while it's raining feeling those feelings. great writing. lovely.
     

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