Are you happy now? You've finally won Proven me a dick now My asshole father's asshole son I give up, I give in Cannot play your game anymore Fucked up from the start, now you win Won the battle, maybe the war nonetheless lost me I can't do this anymore
You could make it more even, so it would "fit better" together, like, revise it and some of the words so the syllables match up and stuff. Other than that, I think it's great.
