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  1. PunchDrunkKitten

    PunchDrunkKitten borne on the fm waves of a broken heart

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    Author's Note: any level of positive, or negative feeback is welcome. Please, if you read to the end, say something coz im losing the mojo to put pen to paper.. Unless you wanna argue contextual particulates, then fuck off. I wrote the shit, I know what I meant to convey.
    =^.^=
    Thankies.

    "~~~"

    There's a cancer mestastizing in my chest,
    And I'm laying in a haze somewhere
    Watching everyone watching me die.

    Slowly every day,
    The virus hallows out, mumifying
    The beater model of my most essential organs.

    A rolling greyness
    Covers my remaining shell.
    So of course im snorting lines,
    And toking all the time.

    And the sea around me ebs and flows
    In the most pitiful storms.
    Never the less, it flurries
    Chaos coating my decay.

    Then, i hide away.

    And focus all my barely gasping cognizance
    On a radio active fog,
    That shone in bottomless green and black
    With always the big red streak.
     
  2. Moonglow181

    Moonglow181 Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    Is this poem based on any truth about you? :(

    You seem to be an excellent writer.
     
  3. PunchDrunkKitten

    PunchDrunkKitten borne on the fm waves of a broken heart

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    Thank you, but ive little cognizance of the work until it stops flowing. This is actually unfinished as well, but once i put a piece down i never pick it up again.
    This is an allegorical comentary on whats been my current mental and environmental state of being, yes..
     

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