Discussion in 'Poetry' started by environmental_junkie, Jan 10, 2005.

  1. I wrote this the other day. Hope you enjoy.

    Today I had an unknown thought
    it was something of pure beauty
    and true mystery
    this is an unconsious thought for all
    which when realized
    is patronized
    this mysterious beauty
    is an internal dream
    in our hearts and blood
    it is reflected within ourselves
    at all moments
    and all motives questioned
    all right
    all wrong
    for this beauty is mysterious and unknown
    and the unknown has no boundries.

    -Stacie L.

    Think you know what this poem is about?
  2. kidder

    kidder Member

    I wish it was a little more concrete. Your unknown thought is still unknown. I wish I could grasp it.
  3. It's not the simply the thought that is unknown... there really is a thought which I hate, which many others have but will not express....
  4. kidder

    kidder Member

    Stop teasing! I won't tell.
  5. Well just go and think about it, and tell me if you think you've figured it out.
  6. KittenX

    KittenX Purrrific

    Unknown is also feared ya know. *chuckles*
    * ourselfs should be ourselves.
  7. I guess my poems only make sense to me. But I wish people would look more into them, even if they do seem lame.

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