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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chandra anjali, May 13, 2004.

  1. chandra anjali

    chandra anjali Member

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    broken sunlight
    tattered dreams
    things aren't always what they seem.
    life's abound
    bridging lies
    beneath the spaces where time flies

    sunlight splashing
    on my face
    summer's warm embrace
    hugging cotton
    chasing dreams
    things aren't always what they seem.
     
  2. eccofarmer

    eccofarmer Member

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    NAMASTE


    Wow!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. tourmaline

    tourmaline Member

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    sounds sorta like my poetry - good job :)
     
  4. HippieFlowerGirl67

    HippieFlowerGirl67 Banned

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  5. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

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    Truly, this is excellent. Get thee to a publisher! ;)
     
  6. Lather

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    It's beautiful... you have a talent, make good use of it
     
  7. LittleRu

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    Lovley. Makes me feel all warm and cuddly.
     

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