Discussion in 'Poetry' started by chandra anjali, May 13, 2004.

  1. broken sunlight
    tattered dreams
    things aren't always what they seem.
    life's abound
    bridging lies
    beneath the spaces where time flies

    sunlight splashing
    on my face
    summer's warm embrace
    hugging cotton
    chasing dreams
    things aren't always what they seem.
  2. eccofarmer

    eccofarmer Member


  3. tourmaline

    tourmaline Member

    sounds sorta like my poetry - good job :)
  4. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    Truly, this is excellent. Get thee to a publisher! ;)
  5. Lather

    Lather Member

    It's beautiful... you have a talent, make good use of it
  6. LittleRu

    LittleRu Member

    Lovley. Makes me feel all warm and cuddly.

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