this place

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by floyd4peace, Jun 25, 2006.

  1. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

    what mystical world have i entered
    where it's rocks grow tall
    and it's sky is unfurled

    the grains of sand
    change frequently
    with bursts of wind
    which alter reality

    the sky changes colour
    with scheduled time
    two spheres glow brightly
    taking turns in the sky

    one full of heat
    it's angry and fierce
    the other cold and neat
    and entrancing through the years

    the colours and hughes
    that occupy this world
    emerald and saphire
    the great ones entwirled

    granted the magick
    of reproduction
    it's life's true beauty
    exceeding imagination

    this free mystic world
    has be confined and hurt
    it's name still remains
    it's known as Earth
     
  2. vodoo chile

    vodoo chile Member

    wow that was great.
     
  3. madlizard

    madlizard Senior Member

    Mmm, I like this a lot. Vivid imagery.
     
  4. floyd4peace

    floyd4peace Member

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