The Whole World is Watching (song)

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by realityneversticks, Aug 21, 2005.

  1. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    The whole world is watching
    Looking for the news
    You better pick and choose
    Either way you're gonna lose

    The whole world is watching
    Finding out what you've done
    Everything under the sun
    Now it's not so fun

    The whole world is watching
    Waiting for you to react
    The whole world is watching
    Gonna feel the impact
    The whole world is watching
    Gotta get this strange old world...
    Back on track

    The whole world is watching
    We caught the camera's eye
    Dragged it from the pretty sky
    To see those who die

    The whole world is watching
    Happy new times drop the ball
    You can make one fall
    But you can't kill us all

    The whole world is watching
    Waiting for you to react
    The whole world is watching
    Gonna feel the impact
    The whole world is watching
    Gotta get this strange old world...
    Back on track

    The whole world is watching
    And the sun and the moon
    We'll see to you soon
    At just about high noon

    The whole world is watching
    Justice be dealt
    Yeah, that's how we felt
    When all our heart's did melt

    The whole world is watching
    Waiting for you to react
    The whole world is watching
    Gonna feel the impact
    The whole world is watching
    Gotta get this strange old world...
    Back on track

    The whole world is watching
    And we are too
    But you don't have a clue
    What you have to do
     
  2. boothy

    boothy Senior Member

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    As it's a song, it would work with music, but that's the hard part for many :)

    But it would need music in my opinion, it's would work well to listen to, if you wrote the right music, but to read as a poem on it's own, it doesn't cut it in my opinion.

    Do you play any instruments?

    Peace,

    boothy :)
     
  3. TreeFiddy

    TreeFiddy Member

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    wow...ur style really just grabs my attention and makes me keep reading. love ur song style.
     
  4. realityneversticks

    realityneversticks Member

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    Glad you liked the stye. I was experimenting with new ones. I beleive this song I wrote has a deeper message than first appears. The music for the song was written by a member of my band.
     
  5. sylvanlightning

    sylvanlightning Prismatic Essence

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    I liked it.

    All the world watches,
    as we dissolve private into public.

    All the world watchs,
    as we dance uninhibited.

    All the world watches,
    as we pave our purpose
    with actualized promises.

    All the world watches
    as we watch ourselves,
    like sparks of spirit
    in the mirror of Self.
     

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