the shadows fight

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by helen-maple, May 29, 2004.

  1. helen-maple

    helen-maple Member

    intricate

    the way we weave thru
    dancing launghing
    crying dying

    i watch you
    indifferent to
    the world around
    not so,
    where is your
    truth?

    look away
    turn within
    let the petals
    from your blood roses
    fall
    take the light
    into your eyes
    the shadows
    fight
    to regain
    their elusive-ness
    try living.
    find your bliss
     
  2. lovely you pull all i we feel in this piece

    life....

    i felt utter bliss after reading ..
    thankyou
    love n peace from saff
     
  3. Fierce_Flawless

    Fierce_Flawless Hip Forums Supporter HipForums Supporter

    your poems are so simple, so easy to reflect anyone's experiences in. i truly love to read you. i can't wait until the old forums are archived so i can read them all over again! thanks for the beautious poem.

    ~River
     
  4. Intricate yet simple, its depth not lessened but increased by the economy of your words.

    Loved it.

    :cool:
     
  5. littleskinny

    littleskinny Member

    I love that part....it's very telling.
     
  6. helen-maple

    helen-maple Member

    aww, thanks so much..
     

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