I'm currently doing re-writing off the net. I just sat down and made it all up as I went, but i think I can improve on LOTS of it--particularly the first few parts and some of the details that would help flesh out the story. Thanks for all the encouragement as I went along you folks. Everything I have written can be considered the first part of the story. Becky WILL return because I have fun writing about her and her indomitable ways. -------------------Thanks again folks-----------Joel
Sounds good to me. I have to say I was hoping for a new installment. I really enjoyed reading this Joel.
this is just....BRAVO Scratcho, it took me many times to come back and get through the entire story but it was worth it friend. You are a writing fool! Keep up the awesome work!