The Rain

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by steel_bubbles, Jun 10, 2006.

  1. steel_bubbles

    steel_bubbles Member

    Feel the Rain

    Raise your head…

    Raise your head and feel the rain.

    Feel it pour…

    Let it wash away the pain.

    Feel the rain.



    Can you feel it?

    Can you feel the rain?

    Can you feel it pour?

    Pour… let it pour…

    Cleanse the pores of your skin…

    Let it rain…

    Feel the rain…



    Raise your head.

    It’s raining.

    Raise your head and feel it mend your soul.

    Feel it pour…

    Let it wash away your pain…

    Can you feel it?

    Can you feel the rain?

    Raise your head.

    Raise your head and feel the rain.

     
  2. TrippinBTM

    TrippinBTM Ramblin' Man

    ^truly, say it out loud to yourself, it's worth it. Well done, love the repetition.
     
  3. steel_bubbles

    steel_bubbles Member

    Thanks guys!
     

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