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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BrownTripleQQ, Mar 17, 2005.

  1. Billy Brown

    Billy Brown Member

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    Everyday
    Without fail
    The cute girl with black hair (bluish tint)
    Blushes a soft pink
    While whispering "here"
    As the teacher calls roll
     
  2. Mr Mojo Risin'

    Mr Mojo Risin' How are you 'now'?

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    Sugar hill,
    tiddle piddle,
    night night,
    shes gone back to the otherside,

    shes young but wise,
    little nipples appear in a slant of enlarging light,
    a rage of anger,
    a big grin,
    shes gone back to the otherside

    tell me why...
    tell me how...

    :p :p [​IMG] :p
     
  3. Hippievixen

    Hippievixen Lifetime Supporter Lifetime Supporter

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    it is all so awesome...

    you know you got it goin' on, shaba! :)
     
  4. shaba

    shaba Grand Inquisitor

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    Thank you very much Ms.Vixen, coming from you it means alot.
     
  5. heifers_calf

    heifers_calf Member

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    Are you all ready to be grossed out this poem was based on an actual event I was working outside of town on a house in the hot summer sun.Thirstation kicked in so I searched out a water spicket,and found what apeared to be a well with a switch to a pump leading to a hose.?????
    Anul burps washed down with a tidal wave of urinouse spoo.Acidic regurgitate breath of vomit.Butt munching sewerslurp lasting tast of yesterdays fesses simmering in a stew of vomutous concoction of body waist.
    Bbbllaaaaghhhhtth!!!!
    Gasp spew,heave a vocal fart.
    Grrgle grgle
    swegg spit
    gasp gasp spit
    spew gag.
    Stinking breath of urinal shit hole vomitus gurgling sewer slurping putrid spew. Infestation of aborted fetal reject. Vat of sewer brew .Acidic bile sent to sink into the toilet fountain of stinking shit
    Burp Peww
    Gag spit

    Oh by the way if you hadnt guessed by now .It was the sewer sump pump I found.Bad way to findout what that was for.
    P.S. yall give up yet?
     
  6. Mr Mojo Risin'

    Mr Mojo Risin' How are you 'now'?

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    haha... well
     
  7. TomDijon

    TomDijon Member

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    bluish tinge along the fringe
    i find myself in ego binge
    claws of stars finely singe
    the rusty sound of mental hinge
    into my bright-eyed mind's confind
    cracking crusted cobweb's kind
    killing slowly dead end flesh
    that contains the "new" the "hip" the "fresh"
    I CAN FEEL IT MESH INTO MY COLD
    CLIMBING VINE OF CATACOMBS
    THAT BUILD THE EMPTY PLACE IN BONE
    THAT KEEPS MY ROTTING FLESH AT HOME
    I'M PRONE!I'M PRONE!
    YOU HEAR ME GROAN I'M ALL ALONE!
    SURROUNDED BY INTERLACED GRACE IT KEEPS ME IN MY PLACE I'M JUST A FACE A CORDLESS PHONE WITHOUT A BASE CAN YOU HEAR ME? CAN YOU HEAR ME NOW?
     

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